[NCSG-PC] Fwd: [Urgent] NCSG Comment on Evolving ICANN’s Multistakeholder Model

[Tatiana Tropina]

Hi all,
I am now in transit and will try work on this in this evening or tomorrow.
Cheers,
Tanya

On Fri 14. Jun 2019 at 15:25, Elsa S <elsa.saade at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> I reviewed quickly but I’ll have to review it meticulously after checking
> in with you folks. Generally, this looks like a human rights report, not a
> public comment. I’m not sure if we should change the whole format or keep
> it the way it is? (I am aware we don’t have much time anymore - but if
> someone else is willing to work on it with me, I’d be happy to do it).
>
> E.
> —
>
> On Fri, Jun 14, 2019 at 4:52 AM Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> thanks Stephanie, yes everyone should jump in to tidy-up and resolve
>> issues in the draft.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Rafik
>>
>> Le ven. 14 juin 2019 à 09:56, Stephanie Perrin <
>> stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca> a écrit :
>>
>>> I am trying to edit this, but it needs extensive revision in my view.
>>> Not clear where the tangents we are going off on are coming from....
>>>
>>> Please tune in folks.  This is important.
>>>
>>> Steph
>>>
>>>
>>> On 2019-06-13 14:55, Rafik Dammak wrote:
>>>
>>> Hi all,
>>>
>>> this is an urgent task for NCSG PC to review and prepare this draft for
>>> submission. we are already late and we should make it by this week as it is
>>> critical public comment.
>>> tidying-up the document and proof-reading are needed.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
>>> De : Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>>> Date: mer. 12 juin 2019 à 18:19
>>> Subject: [Urgent] NCSG Comment on Evolving ICANN’s Multistakeholder Model
>>> To: NCSG <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>
>>>
>>>
>>> hi all,
>>>
>>> please find for review and comment the NCSG submission on  Evolving
>>> ICANN’s Multistakeholder Model
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pz4rYiUx3FDl7af_stZYfRig0rgqekbRGFAxwG748D4/edit
>>> , prepared by a drafting team for your consideration and review.
>>>
>>> Best regards,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
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