<div><div dir="auto">Hi all, </div></div><div dir="auto">I am now in transit and will try work on this in this evening or tomorrow.</div><div dir="auto">Cheers, </div><div dir="auto">Tanya </div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Fri 14. Jun 2019 at 15:25, Elsa S <<a href="mailto:elsa.saade@gmail.com">elsa.saade@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><div dir="auto">Hi all,</div></div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">I reviewed quickly but I’ll have to review it meticulously after checking in with you folks. Generally, this looks like a human rights report, not a public comment. I’m not sure if we should change the whole format or keep it the way it is? (I am aware we don’t have much time anymore - but if someone else is willing to work on it with me, I’d be happy to do it).</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">E.</div><div dir="auto">—</div><div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Fri, Jun 14, 2019 at 4:52 AM Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div>thanks Stephanie, yes everyone should jump in to tidy-up and resolve issues in the draft.</div><div><br></div><div>Best,</div><div><br></div><div>Rafik</div></div><div dir="ltr"><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">Le ven. 14 juin 2019 à 09:56, Stephanie Perrin <<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>> a écrit :<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">I am trying to edit this, but it needs extensive revision in my view. Not clear where the tangents we are going off on are coming from....</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Please tune in folks. This is important.</font></font></p>
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<div>this is an urgent task for NCSG PC to review and prepare this draft for submission. we are already late and we should make it by this week as it is critical public comment.</div>
<div>tidying-up the document and proof-reading are needed.</div>
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Date: mer. 12 juin 2019 à 18:19<br>
Subject: [Urgent] NCSG Comment on Evolving ICANN’s Multistakeholder Model<br>
To: NCSG <<a href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu" target="_blank">NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu</a>><br>
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<div class="gmail_quote">please find for review and comment the NCSG submission on Evolving ICANN’s Multistakeholder Model <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pz4rYiUx3FDl7af_stZYfRig0rgqekbRGFAxwG748D4/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pz4rYiUx3FDl7af_stZYfRig0rgqekbRGFAxwG748D4/edit</a>
, prepared by a drafting team for your consideration and review.</div>
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<div class="gmail_quote">Best regards,</div>
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