[NCSG-PC] Fwd: [Urgent] NCSG Comment on Evolving ICANN’s Multistakeholder Model

[Rafik Dammak]

Hi all,

thanks for the edits.
I tried to clean-up the document and remove the unnecessary parts. it is
getting shape but I am not sure that is ready since some items on list have
no comments. They need to be filled.

Reading Stephanie email about inviting Brian to NCSG session, I was
wondering about :
- reach staff about the comment , we will be late even after the deadline
extension, checking when they are planning to issue the summary report.
Depending of the date, we might have a "grace period" or not.
- using the comment to channel our concerns directly to Brian during NCSG
session in Marrakech and follow-up after in written form depending if we
can make it for the public comment. I think our focus should be the
substance , complaining about the process initiated by board to Brian
doesn't make sense IMHO since he was hired to do the work (and not
responsible for starting this)

Best,

Rafik
Le ven. 14 juin 2019 à 22:35, Tatiana Tropina <tatiana.tropina at gmail.com> a
écrit :

> Hi all,
> I am now in transit and will try work on this in this evening or tomorrow.
> Cheers,
> Tanya
>
> On Fri 14. Jun 2019 at 15:25, Elsa S <elsa.saade at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> I reviewed quickly but I’ll have to review it meticulously after checking
>> in with you folks. Generally, this looks like a human rights report, not a
>> public comment. I’m not sure if we should change the whole format or keep
>> it the way it is? (I am aware we don’t have much time anymore - but if
>> someone else is willing to work on it with me, I’d be happy to do it).
>>
>> E.
>> —
>>
>> On Fri, Jun 14, 2019 at 4:52 AM Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> thanks Stephanie, yes everyone should jump in to tidy-up and resolve
>>> issues in the draft.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>> Le ven. 14 juin 2019 à 09:56, Stephanie Perrin <
>>> stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca> a écrit :
>>>
>>>> I am trying to edit this, but it needs extensive revision in my view.
>>>> Not clear where the tangents we are going off on are coming from....
>>>>
>>>> Please tune in folks.  This is important.
>>>>
>>>> Steph
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 2019-06-13 14:55, Rafik Dammak wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Hi all,
>>>>
>>>> this is an urgent task for NCSG PC to review and prepare this draft for
>>>> submission. we are already late and we should make it by this week as it is
>>>> critical public comment.
>>>> tidying-up the document and proof-reading are needed.
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Rafik
>>>>
>>>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
>>>> De : Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>>>> Date: mer. 12 juin 2019 à 18:19
>>>> Subject: [Urgent] NCSG Comment on Evolving ICANN’s Multistakeholder
>>>> Model
>>>> To: NCSG <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> hi all,
>>>>
>>>> please find for review and comment the NCSG submission on  Evolving
>>>> ICANN’s Multistakeholder Model
>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pz4rYiUx3FDl7af_stZYfRig0rgqekbRGFAxwG748D4/edit
>>>> , prepared by a drafting team for your consideration and review.
>>>>
>>>> Best regards,
>>>>
>>>> Rafik
>>>>
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