[NCSG-PC] Response to IPC/BC model

[Kathy Kleiman]

Hi Ayden, Good question. I think we should send it to Cherine and Goran 
and copy the email address in which Brian Winterfeldt and his law firm 
asked for "comments.'

/I can't seem to find that email address right now -- would you happen 
to have it?/

All on the PC, I'm downloading the document shortly for final check of 
the citations and formatting. Google doc does not make indented 
citations easy :-).  No more edits, please.  I'll have this over to 
Rafik and Farzi shortly.

Best, Kathy


On 4/5/2018 6:17 PM, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
> I understand from the notifications from Google that changes are being 
> accepted, that work is still underway editing this document and 
> getting it into a submittable state. So I suppose now is the time to 
> ask, who are we sending this letter to? BC Chair and IPC President, 
> with Goran and Cherine in cc?
>
> -- Ayden
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On 4 April 2018 4:09 AM, Kathy Kleiman <kathy at kathykleiman.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi All,
>>
>> Tx to Ayden for his excellent edits, now incorporated (with a few 
>> comments highlighting proposed rephrasing, Ayden). Tx also to Martin 
>> for his review!
>>
>> Back to the PC to continue review...
>>
>> Best, Kathy
>>
>>
>> On 4/3/2018 7:40 PM, Martin Pablo Silva Valent wrote:
>>> I am reading it now, but between Kathy and Ayden’s work, it looks 
>>> good to go. I’ll add my comments if any. So far, my full support.
>>>
>>> Cheers,
>>> Martín
>>>
>>>
>>>> On 3 Apr 2018, at 20:38, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com 
>>>> <mailto:icann at ferdeline.com>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Hi,
>>>>
>>>> I have reviewed the document now and put forward some suggested 
>>>> edits. Some are substantive changes but all are in the same spirit 
>>>> of the original text.
>>>>
>>>> The formatting looks a bit odd; I hope the text alignments can be 
>>>> corrected prior to submission.
>>>>
>>>> I think the conclusion lacks punch; but can’t think of what it is 
>>>> missing at the moment...
>>>>
>>>> Best wishes,
>>>>
>>>> Ayden
>>>>
>>>> P.S. Thanks to those who drafted it
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Wed, Apr 4, 2018 at 01:24, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com 
>>>> <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>>>> Hi Farzaneh,
>>>>>
>>>>> thanks for this.
>>>>> I would like to ask PC members to review it asap.
>>>>>
>>>>> Best,
>>>>>
>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>
>>>>> 2018-04-04 6:57 GMT+09:00 farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com 
>>>>> <mailto:farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>>:
>>>>>
>>>>>     Hi all
>>>>>
>>>>>     Im on a plane so let me know if the link below is correct.
>>>>>     Kathy has written a response on ipc bc
>>>>>
>>>>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/16miuxuAYYgwUQHPde8N02W6G84oibuV9m4W3ZTeI_SA
>>>>>     <https://docs.google.com/document/d/16miuxuAYYgwUQHPde8N02W6G84oibuV9m4W3ZTeI_SA>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>     We need to go through it asap and send it before their meeting.
>>>>>
>>>>>     Please comment quickly and make sure you are on suggestion
>>>>>     mode (i set it that way not sure it went through)
>>>>>     -- 
>>>>>
>>>>>     Farzaneh
>>>>>
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