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<p>Hi Ayden, Good question. I think we should send it to Cherine and
Goran and copy the email address in which Brian Winterfeldt and
his law firm asked for "comments.' <br>
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<p><i>I can't seem to find that email address right now -- would you
happen to have it?</i></p>
<p>All on the PC, I'm downloading the document shortly for final
check of the citations and formatting. Google doc does not make
indented citations easy :-). No more edits, please. I'll have
this over to Rafik and Farzi shortly.</p>
<p>Best, Kathy<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 4/5/2018 6:17 PM, Ayden Férdeline
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<div>I understand from the notifications from Google that changes
are being accepted, that work is still underway editing this
document and getting it into a submittable state. So I suppose
now is the time to ask, who are we sending this letter to? BC
Chair and IPC President, with Goran and Cherine in cc?</div>
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<div> On 4 April 2018 4:09 AM, Kathy Kleiman
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<p>Hi All, <br>
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<p>Tx to Ayden for his excellent edits, now incorporated (with a
few comments highlighting proposed rephrasing, Ayden). Tx also
to Martin for his review!<br>
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<p>Back to the PC to continue review...<br>
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<p>Best, Kathy<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 4/3/2018 7:40 PM, Martin Pablo
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<div>I am reading it now, but between Kathy and Ayden’s work,
it looks good to go. I’ll add my comments if any. So far, my
full support. <br>
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<div>Martín<br>
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<div class="">On 3 Apr 2018, at 20:38, Ayden Férdeline
<<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" class=""
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<div class="">Hi,<br>
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<div class="">I have reviewed the document now and put
forward some suggested edits. Some are substantive
changes but all are in the same spirit of the
original text. <br>
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<div class="">The formatting looks a bit odd; I hope
the text alignments can be corrected prior to
submission. <br>
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<div class="">I think the conclusion lacks punch; but
can’t think of what it is missing at the moment...<br>
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<div class="">Best wishes,<br>
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<div class="">Ayden<br>
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<div class="">P.S. Thanks to those who drafted it <br>
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<div>On Wed, Apr 4, 2018 at 01:24, Rafik Dammak
<<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com"
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<div class="">thanks for this.<br>
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<div class="">I would like to ask PC
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badii <span dir="ltr" class=""><<a
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<div dir="auto" class="">Hi all <br>
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<div dir="auto" class="">Im on a plane so
let me know if the link below is
correct. Kathy has written a response on
ipc bc <br>
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<div dir="auto" class="">We need to go
through it asap and send it before
their meeting. <br>
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<div dir="auto" class="">Please comment
quickly and make sure you are on
suggestion mode (i set it that way not
sure it went through) <br>
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