[NCSG-PC] Response to IPC/BC model

[Ayden Férdeline]

I understand from the notifications from Google that changes are being accepted, that work is still underway editing this document and getting it into a submittable state. So I suppose now is the time to ask, who are we sending this letter to? BC Chair and IPC President, with Goran and Cherine in cc?

-- Ayden

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On 4 April 2018 4:09 AM, Kathy Kleiman <kathy at kathykleiman.com> wrote:

> Hi All,
>
> Tx to Ayden for his excellent edits, now incorporated (with a few comments highlighting proposed rephrasing, Ayden). Tx also to Martin for his review!
>
> Back to the PC to continue review...
>
> Best, Kathy
>
> On 4/3/2018 7:40 PM, Martin Pablo Silva Valent wrote:
>
>> I am reading it now, but between Kathy and Ayden’s work, it looks good to go. I’ll add my comments if any. So far, my full support.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Martín
>>
>>> On 3 Apr 2018, at 20:38, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:
>>>
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> I have reviewed the document now and put forward some suggested edits. Some are substantive changes but all are in the same spirit of the original text.
>>>
>>> The formatting looks a bit odd; I hope the text alignments can be corrected prior to submission.
>>>
>>> I think the conclusion lacks punch; but can’t think of what it is missing at the moment...
>>>
>>> Best wishes,
>>>
>>> Ayden
>>>
>>> P.S. Thanks to those who drafted it
>>>
>>> On Wed, Apr 4, 2018 at 01:24, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hi Farzaneh,
>>>>
>>>> thanks for this.
>>>> I would like to ask PC members to review it asap.
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Rafik
>>>>
>>>> 2018-04-04 6:57 GMT+09:00 farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi all
>>>>>
>>>>> Im on a plane so let me know if the link below is correct. Kathy has written a response on ipc bc
>>>>>
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/16miuxuAYYgwUQHPde8N02W6G84oibuV9m4W3ZTeI_SA
>>>>>
>>>>> We need to go through it asap and send it before their meeting.
>>>>>
>>>>> Please comment quickly and make sure you are on suggestion mode (i set it that way not sure it went through) --
>>>>>
>>>>> Farzaneh
>>>>>
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