<div>I understand from the notifications from Google that changes are being accepted, that work is still underway editing this document and getting it into a submittable state. So I suppose now is the time to ask, who are we sending this letter to? BC Chair and IPC President, with Goran and Cherine in cc?</div><div><br></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block"><div class="protonmail_signature_block-user"><div>-- Ayden <br></div></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block-proton protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div>‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br></div><div> On 4 April 2018 4:09 AM, Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com> wrote:<br></div><div> <br></div><blockquote type="cite" class="protonmail_quote"><p>Hi All, <br></p><p>Tx to Ayden for his excellent edits, now incorporated (with a few
comments highlighting proposed rephrasing, Ayden). Tx also to
Martin for his review!<br></p><p>Back to the PC to continue review...<br></p><p>Best, Kathy<br></p><div><br></div><div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 4/3/2018 7:40 PM, Martin Pablo Silva
Valent wrote:<br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>I am reading it now, but between Kathy and Ayden’s work, it looks
good to go. I’ll add my comments if any. So far, my full support. <br></div><div class=""><br></div><div class="">Cheers,<br></div><div class=""><div>Martín<br></div><div> <br></div><div><div><br></div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 3 Apr 2018, at 20:38, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" class="">icann@ferdeline.com</a>>
wrote:<br></div><div><br></div><div class=""><div class="">Hi,<br></div><div class=""><br></div><div class="">I have reviewed the document now and put
forward some suggested edits. Some are substantive
changes but all are in the same spirit of the original
text. <br></div><div class=""><br></div><div class="">The formatting looks a bit odd; I hope the
text alignments can be corrected prior to submission. <br></div><div class=""><br></div><div class="">I think the conclusion lacks punch; but
can’t think of what it is missing at the moment...<br></div><div class=""><br></div><div class="">Best wishes,<br></div><div class=""><br></div><div class="">Ayden<br></div><div class=""><br></div><div class="">P.S. Thanks to those who drafted it <br></div><div class=""><div><br></div><div class=""><div class=""><br></div><div>On Wed, Apr 4, 2018 at 01:24, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" class="">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>>
wrote:<br></div></div><blockquote class="protonmail_quote" type="cite"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="gmail_extra"><div class=""><div class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div class="">Hi Farzaneh,<br></div><div class=""><br></div><div class="">thanks for this.<br></div><div class="">I would like to ask PC members
to review it asap. <br></div><div class=""><br></div><div class="">Best,<br></div><div class=""><br></div><div class="">Rafik<br></div></div></div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div>2018-04-04 6:57 GMT+09:00
farzaneh badii <span dir="ltr" class=""><<a href="mailto:farzaneh.badii@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">farzaneh.badii@gmail.com</a>></span>: <br></div><div> <br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:
0px 0px 0px 0.8ex; border-left-width: 1px;
border-left-style: solid; border-left-color:
rgb(204, 204, 204);"><div dir="auto" class="">Hi all <br></div><div dir="auto" class=""><br></div><div dir="auto" class="">Im on a plane so let
me know if the link below is correct. Kathy
has written a response on ipc bc <br></div><div dir="auto" class=""><div dir="auto" class=""><br></div><div class=""><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/16miuxuAYYgwUQHPde8N02W6G84oibuV9m4W3ZTeI_SA" target="_blank" class="">https://docs.google.com/<wbr class="">document/d/<wbr class="">16miuxuAYYgwUQHPde8N02W6G84oib<wbr class="">uV9m4W3ZTeI_SA</a><br></div><div dir="auto" class=""><br></div><div dir="auto" class=""><br></div><div dir="auto" class="">We need to go
through it asap and send it before their
meeting. <br></div><div dir="auto" class=""><br></div><div dir="auto" class="">Please comment
quickly and make sure you are on
suggestion mode (i set it that way not
sure it went through) <br></div></div><span class="HOEnZb"><span style="color:#888888" class="colour"><div>-- <br></div><div> <br></div><div dir="ltr" class="m_740783456350225684gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><span style="font-family:verdana, sans-serif" class="font">Farzaneh</span><br></div></div></div></span></span><div><br></div><div>______________________________<wbr class="">_________________ <br></div><div> NCSG-PC mailing list <br></div><div> <a href="mailto:NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is" class="">NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is</a> <br></div><div> <a href="https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/listinfo/ncsg-pc" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank" class="">https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/<wbr class="">listinfo/ncsg-pc</a> <br></div><div> <br></div></blockquote></div><div><br></div></div></div></blockquote></div><div>_______________________________________________<br></div><div> NCSG-PC mailing list<br></div><div> <a href="mailto:NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is" class="">NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is</a><br></div><div> <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/listinfo/ncsg-pc">https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/listinfo/ncsg-pc</a><br></div></div></blockquote></div><div><br></div></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><pre wrap="">_______________________________________________
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