[NCSG-PC] Fw: Re: [Gnso-sc-budget] IMPORTANT: Initial Draft of Comments on 5YSP FA & OIs Public Consultation

[Ayden Férdeline]

Attached are some edits I have proposed to the GNSO Council comment on the financial assumptions document, embedding many of the perspectives raised on the proposed NCSG comment on this matter. Please advise if you have any concerns/requested edits and I will take these forward to the Standing Committee on Budget and Operations (SCBO).

(Still looking to be replaced there, by the way! The SCBO has a lot of work on its plate, and it makes a lot more sense for there to be continuity and the one NCSG rep there now and through the conclusion of the FY21 budgetary process.)

Many thanks, Ayden

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On Monday, 29 July 2019 20:15, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:

> Given the time crunch we are under, I am sharing my edits to this document as an attachment now - I have not yet received NCSG input, but if/when I do, I will advise on this list if it differs from anything in the attached file. Thanks.
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> -- Ayden
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> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On Monday, 29 July 2019 19:49, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:
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>> Hi Keith, all-
>>
>> Thank you for the reminder about this comment.
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>> I am currently reviewing the draft with NCSG colleagues and will share NCSG comments and proposed edits as soon as we can.
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>> I hope others too will be able to share input as a matter of priority.
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>> Best wishes,
>>
>> Ayden Férdeline
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>> On Friday, 26 July 2019 10:54, Drazek, Keith via Gnso-sc-budget <gnso-sc-budget at icann.org> wrote:
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>>> Hello SCBO colleagues.
>>>
>>> The Council has a deadline of Monday, 5 August to submit comments on the ICANN 5-Year Strategic Planning Process Financial Assumptions and Operating Initiatives. That leaves us just a few days to finalize our SCBO recommendations for Council review and consideration.
>>>
>>> This is an important topic and the SCBO needs to step up and do its work here, and we need to deliver draft comments to the Council by early next week so the full Council has time to review. I am setting a deadline of Tuesday for the SCBO to finalize its recommended text.
>>>
>>> Berry has developed an excellent first draft (attached) with additional comments for consideration, but it’s the responsibility of the SCBO to do this substantive work and bring it to completion. Please make time to review and provide input. I will help finalize this, but this comment period is precisely why the SCBO was established and why you all volunteered to join and contribute.
>>>
>>> Thanks in advance.
>>>
>>> Regards,
>>>
>>> Keith
>>>
>>> From: Gnso-sc-budget <gnso-sc-budget-bounces at icann.org> On Behalf Of mail at berrycobb.com
>>> Sent: Saturday, July 20, 2019 12:41 AM
>>> To: gnso-sc-budget at icann.org
>>> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [Gnso-sc-budget] Initial Draft of Comments on 5YSP FA & OIs Public Consultation
>>>
>>> I’m attaching a word doc as easy reference in case there’s an issue with accessing the google link.
>>>
>>> B
>>>
>>> Berry Cobb
>>>
>>> @berrycobb
>>>
>>> GNSO Policy Consultant
>>>
>>> From: mail at berrycobb.com <mail at berrycobb.com>
>>> Sent: Saturday, July 20, 2019 00:35
>>> To: gnso-sc-budget at icann.org
>>> Subject: Initial Draft of Comments on 5YSP FA & OIs Public Consultation
>>>
>>> Hi All,
>>>
>>> Please see a link to a google doc with an initial draft of comments for the SCBO to consider, revise, and build upon for review by the GNSO Council. I’ve listed out two sections for each document that is a part of the public comment until 5 August. There’s a small comment on the Financial Assumptions document and the Operational Initiatives has a sub-section for each of the 16, some of which are placeholders that require attention. There are a series of side bar comments to review and consider as well.
>>>
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yw7NEdeZICrnK9ZsdX-gXmX9YYvsadRz/edit
>>>
>>> As a reminder, we are meeting with the CCNSO’s SOPC next 23 July at 12:00 UTC. An agenda will be sent out shortly, but it will mostly focus around the comments to be submitted and the 5YSP in general. If we have time, we might also discuss the potential for future engagements around the budget cycle.
>>>
>>> Thank you and please let me know if you have questions in the mean time.
>>>
>>> B
>>>
>>> Berry Cobb
>>>
>>> @berrycobb
>>>
>>> GNSO Policy Consultant
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