[NCSG-PC] Organizational reviews

[farzaneh badii]

Sure thing. I just saw your comments. I removed The unicorn bit and will
address the rest.

On Sat, Jul 27, 2019 at 7:00 PM Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:

> Thank you Farzi, I have annoted the document in Google Docs, leaving some
> comments where appropriate. When resolved I hope we will be able to submit
> this comment. I appreciate you drafting it.
>
> Ayden
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On Saturday, 27 July 2019 19:58, farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> sorry about that. I did not notice I hadn't removed it from the draft
> document which I sent you . Was certainly planning to. Thanks for catching
> that. Is that the only problem you have with the document or is there
> something else wrong with it? I can surely address your concerns if you
> spell them out.
>
> On Sat, Jul 27, 2019 at 6:55 PM Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com>
> wrote:
>
>> I do not support the submission of this comment at this time.
>>
>> I do not support the inclusion of the antagonistic language about
>> "unnecessary expenditure", or referring to ICANN as not being a "unicorn".
>> It is unprofessional.
>>
>> Ayden Férdeline
>>
>>
>> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>> On Friday, 26 July 2019 20:45, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>> hi all,
>>
>> we don't have so much time left, last chance for review.
>> if there is no strong objection by saturday, I will submit the comment.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Rafik
>>
>> Le ven. 26 juil. 2019 à 13:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> a
>> écrit :
>>
>>> Hi Farzaneh,
>>>
>>> thanks for work,
>>> @all please review and do the proof-reading. there is no more extension
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>> Le ven. 26 juil. 2019 à 13:26, farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>
>>> a écrit :
>>>
>>>> Hi
>>>>
>>>> This is a first rough draft for organizational reviews.
>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TD-rqV23z0XAhHzLLzRy9A88OASCPHujIEq7gW4DcfA/edit
>>>>
>>>> Tomorrow is the deadline. Please look over it and let me know. should
>>>> be shared with the list as well.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Farzaneh
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>>>
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> Farzaneh
>
>
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Farzaneh
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