[NCSG-PC] Organizational reviews

[farzaneh badii]

I tried to address the rest. I don't know why you don't like the language
on keeping costs down through not having too many face to face meetings.
But I'm not really attached to it so you can just delete it if you want.

On Sat, Jul 27, 2019 at 7:13 PM farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>
wrote:

> Sure thing. I just saw your comments. I removed The unicorn bit and will
> address the rest.
>
> On Sat, Jul 27, 2019 at 7:00 PM Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Thank you Farzi, I have annoted the document in Google Docs, leaving some
>> comments where appropriate. When resolved I hope we will be able to submit
>> this comment. I appreciate you drafting it.
>>
>> Ayden
>>
>>
>> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>> On Saturday, 27 July 2019 19:58, farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>> sorry about that. I did not notice I hadn't removed it from the draft
>> document which I sent you . Was certainly planning to. Thanks for catching
>> that. Is that the only problem you have with the document or is there
>> something else wrong with it? I can surely address your concerns if you
>> spell them out.
>>
>> On Sat, Jul 27, 2019 at 6:55 PM Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> I do not support the submission of this comment at this time.
>>>
>>> I do not support the inclusion of the antagonistic language about
>>> "unnecessary expenditure", or referring to ICANN as not being a "unicorn".
>>> It is unprofessional.
>>>
>>> Ayden Férdeline
>>>
>>>
>>> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>>> On Friday, 26 July 2019 20:45, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>> hi all,
>>>
>>> we don't have so much time left, last chance for review.
>>> if there is no strong objection by saturday, I will submit the comment.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>> Le ven. 26 juil. 2019 à 13:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> a
>>> écrit :
>>>
>>>> Hi Farzaneh,
>>>>
>>>> thanks for work,
>>>> @all please review and do the proof-reading. there is no more extension
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Rafik
>>>>
>>>> Le ven. 26 juil. 2019 à 13:26, farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>
>>>> a écrit :
>>>>
>>>>> Hi
>>>>>
>>>>> This is a first rough draft for organizational reviews.
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TD-rqV23z0XAhHzLLzRy9A88OASCPHujIEq7gW4DcfA/edit
>>>>>
>>>>> Tomorrow is the deadline. Please look over it and let me know. should
>>>>> be shared with the list as well.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Farzaneh
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>>>>
>>> --
>> Farzaneh
>>
>>
>> --
> Farzaneh
>
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