[NCSG-PC] Organizational reviews

[Ayden Férdeline]

Thank you Farzi, I have annoted the document in Google Docs, leaving some comments where appropriate. When resolved I hope we will be able to submit this comment. I appreciate you drafting it.

Ayden

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On Saturday, 27 July 2019 19:58, farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com> wrote:

> sorry about that. I did not notice I hadn't removed it from the draft document which I sent you . Was certainly planning to. Thanks for catching that. Is that the only problem you have with the document or is there something else wrong with it? I can surely address your concerns if you spell them out.
>
> On Sat, Jul 27, 2019 at 6:55 PM Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:
>
>> I do not support the submission of this comment at this time.
>>
>> I do not support the inclusion of the antagonistic language about "unnecessary expenditure", or referring to ICANN as not being a "unicorn". It is unprofessional.
>>
>> Ayden Férdeline
>>
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>> On Friday, 26 July 2019 20:45, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> hi all,
>>>
>>> we don't have so much time left, last chance for review.
>>> if there is no strong objection by saturday, I will submit the comment.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>> Le ven. 26 juil. 2019 à 13:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> a écrit :
>>>
>>>> Hi Farzaneh,
>>>>
>>>> thanks for work,
>>>> @all please review and do the proof-reading. there is no more extension
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Rafik
>>>>
>>>> Le ven. 26 juil. 2019 à 13:26, farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com> a écrit :
>>>>
>>>>> Hi
>>>>>
>>>>> This is a first rough draft for organizational reviews.  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TD-rqV23z0XAhHzLLzRy9A88OASCPHujIEq7gW4DcfA/edit
>>>>>
>>>>> Tomorrow is the deadline. Please look over it and let me know. should be shared with the list as well.
>>>>>
>>>>> Farzaneh
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> Farzaneh
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