[NCSG-PC] Fwd: Updated Scope for Review

[Stephanie Perrin]

This is an old mail that my machine says did not send.....DId you guys 
get it?  Sorry, it was last weekend.  Blame my crappy bandwidth....

.................................

Yes the draft has been sent to Council DT. Members of the small group 
are Keith, Paul, Susan, me.  He has taken most of my edits in the 
attached doc, but will not delete the J section.  Pam Little agrees with 
my objections, particularly the third deliverable, but thinks the 
registrars can live with the revised latest text.

I talked to Keith this afternoon, and told him that our stakeholder 
group feels strongly that the simultaneous action on the access model is 
almost inevitable under current wording. However, Unless we want to try 
to rally a vote against it,we are a bit stuck.  Keith wants to tick this 
box and get on with it. I suggest we discuss at the PC meeting and 
figure out a strategy.

cheers SP


On 2018-07-15 10:37 PM, farzaneh badii wrote:
> Stephanie
>
> Do you mean that the SP edits were not incorporated in Keith's doc (I 
> don't have Keith's doc on 15 July, only 14)? and why on earth are all 
> the IPC questions incorporated but Darcy's clarification was not?
>
> Stephanie, you probably need to comment on this doc on behalf of NCSG 
> and not just SP edits.
>
> And this small group has two members from IPC/BC and you and Keith?
>
> Does this final draft go to the council for discussion?
>
>
>
>
>
> Farzaneh
>
>
> On Sun, Jul 15, 2018 at 9:31 AM Stephanie Perrin 
> <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca 
> <mailto:stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca>> wrote:
>
>     I am forwarding this new version received from Keith yesterday. 
>     Please do not edit the documents he sent.  I also attach my edits
>     on his document...hard to keep track of this document, I found a
>     bunch of new things to object to, and cannot tell anymore whether
>     I already commented and was ignored, or what. It is called July 15
>     version, v2spedits.  Please get back to me asap with further
>     comments, Keith is working on it today....
>
>
>     Cheers Steph
>
>
>
>     -------- Forwarded Message --------
>     Subject: 	Updated Scope for Review
>     Date: 	Sat, 14 Jul 2018 15:34:26 +0000
>     From: 	Drazek, Keith <kdrazek at verisign.com>
>     <mailto:kdrazek at verisign.com>
>     To: 	PMcGrady at winston.com <mailto:PMcGrady at winston.com>
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>     stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca
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>
>
>     Hi Paul, Stephanie and Susan,
>
>     Attached is the updated scope document for your review. I have
>     attached a redline version, a clean version, and the two sets of
>     comments received from Stephanie and Darcy, both of which I’ve
>     attempted to incorporate.
>
>
>     The one comment from Darcy that I did not incorporate was a
>     request to be more explicit about the timing of initiating
>     discussions on an Access Model – to be at the time of publication
>     of the Initial Report, rather than a less explicit trigger of
>     answering the gating questions. You can see her comments in the
>     attached.
>
>     Otherwise, I think the edits are good and do not substantially or
>     materially impact the previous draft. Please note any concerns,
>     issues or suggested edits ASAP so we can send the final stable
>     draft to the DT by Sunday night.
>
>     I’m hoping this is our last pass at this!
>
>     Thanks in advance,
>
>     Keith
>
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