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<p>This is an old mail that my machine says did not send.....DId you
guys get it? Sorry, it was last weekend. Blame my crappy
bandwidth....</p>
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<p>Yes the draft has been sent to Council DT. Members of the small
group are Keith, Paul, Susan, me. He has taken most of my edits
in the attached doc, but will not delete the J section. Pam
Little agrees with my objections, particularly the third
deliverable, but thinks the registrars can live with the revised
latest text.</p>
<p>I talked to Keith this afternoon, and told him that our
stakeholder group feels strongly that the simultaneous action on
the access model is almost inevitable under current wording.
However, Unless we want to try to rally a vote against it,we are a
bit stuck. Keith wants to tick this box and get on with it. I
suggest we discuss at the PC meeting and figure out a strategy.</p>
<p>cheers SP<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2018-07-15 10:37 PM, farzaneh badii
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style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Do you mean that the SP
edits were not incorporated in Keith's doc (I don't have
Keith's doc on 15 July, only 14)? and why on earth are all the
IPC questions incorporated but Darcy's clarification was not? </div>
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style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Stephanie, you probably
need to comment on this doc on behalf of NCSG and not just SP
edits. </div>
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style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">And this small group
has two members from IPC/BC and you and Keith? </div>
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go to the council for discussion? </div>
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<div dir="ltr">On Sun, Jul 15, 2018 at 9:31 AM Stephanie Perrin
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<p>I am forwarding this new version received from Keith
yesterday. Please do not edit the documents he sent. I
also attach my edits on his document...hard to keep track
of this document, I found a bunch of new things to object
to, and cannot tell anymore whether I already commented
and was ignored, or what. It is called July 15 version,
v2spedits. Please get back to me asap with further
comments, Keith is working on it today....</p>
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<p>Cheers Steph<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Paul, Stephanie and Susan,</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Attached is the updated scope
document for your review. I have attached a redline
version, a clean version, and the two sets of comments
received from Stephanie and Darcy, both of which I’ve
attempted to incorporate.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><br>
The one comment from Darcy that I did not incorporate
was a request to be more explicit about the timing of
initiating discussions on an Access Model – to be at
the time of publication of the Initial Report, rather
than a less explicit trigger of answering the gating
questions. You can see her comments in the attached. </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Otherwise, I think the edits are
good and do not substantially or materially impact the
previous draft. Please note any concerns, issues or
suggested edits ASAP so we can send the final stable
draft to the DT by Sunday night.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I’m hoping this is our last pass at
this!</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks in advance,</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Keith</p>
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