[NCSG-PC] Fwd: EDPD Leadership Comments Table

Ayden Férdeline icann at ferdeline.com
Fri Jul 6 03:19:43 EEST 2018 

All of my edits were rejected. Good luck to everyone else who spends their afternoon reviewing the 8 different Google Docs. I hope some of you edits are accepted...

Ayden

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> From: Marika Konings (Google Docs) <[d+MTEwMTI0MDYyNTI4MDYxMzUzOTA3-MTEyMDY2MDg3OTg4NTE1NjM0MDc2 at docs.google.com](mailto:d%2BMTEwMTI0MDYyNTI4MDYxMzUzOTA3-MTEyMDY2MDg3OTg4NTE1NjM0MDc2 at docs.google.com)>
> Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2018 at 00:02
> Subject: EDPD Leadership Comments Table
> To: <hostime at gmail.com>
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> Marika Konings resolved suggestions in [EDPD Leadership Comments Table](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkM&ts=5b3e955f&usp=comment_email_document)
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> Resolved
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> 24 rejected suggestions
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> Resolved
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> Suggestions
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Add: "as and"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdXYXig_LvoskS-eBAVneoHTeLxPvHJPSP55DaxF37Na774RnMwVSeXxoKr_LRYzOthC-cphLDgiyPpwKbsMg0DcFykP62JGgTt5OIuuumY3uveUu4 at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkM&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Replace: "versus. participating as an EPDP Team member" with ", and not to make personal interventions"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpReN0nGb6rPmqGoJmhr6A019xuRbQsZP5tmJVHqGSg-A4HoCnipfPwwxbB6dTadkPzCT5fpEkRXNkqROvLV34906wyM0Yz9GCVECpn8myqTS3suoeqg at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkI&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Replace: "her" with "the EPDP in their official"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcocxvV6fJMlU34sYNiXR3tjhbkV547x6mgPvUQxBFhV8gwOQJFMlMTgpR0mz2CmPvvc064Yo6GsIrjrQN1BRimwbS64VGe-Z4Ao_jO-QSQ3Wv88VM at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkE&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Replace: "Will make clear when he/she is acting" with "Only participate"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcz8Ho21DqHezbWyCk22b7jPW_xdmcw3oXWUrttIIV_supO65J3lmc8qCGsdIhOBbrTosqpTaAATPciNG_qeLdQFw45pOqDduslo9UW0qMkLQ7jgPQ at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkA&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Replace: "in" with "on calls in their official"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdDiYY7WbBShhMG6P6-xMh8dbtEpOnaja2fW94P2po3XzWFwy3cuBoGRLGmjC70CxTVwD8FPRmz7ztXijhc1gJftgMpFvflLUotugR9HBLjvfnnfsY at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sj4&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Delete: "ing"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRfTznDurVJ-EdwUPgYXbhKOTfRMwc3xWh-RxfjbNCl8xkdgW92dgO_WKPrFRS_dmAD8tKP_hPiv2OIsMRniQOiuQ5raWHZwz-jQ3AwWE1mvwUF2BVw at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sj0&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Replace: "make it explicitly clear when he/she is" with "channel such comments through the representatives of his or her Stakeholder Group, and to only"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRd219ABodPg_BH4cT5ZM2sny8sshk3d4KPI8np1ZjTeLhXLrz5quwjVscl7tQsnS1KcWHUGPY1_eCR1fsNTg_oNxYJ58bcNYhsY1JJZnkeRzAbfu78 at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjw&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Replace: "," with ";"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcFN2ClhUO6T4rIqp8NORym59WLlF6OLCrcDDC4scoykyFK9c1lhuU6begRodUzBU_k-T7zuA76E9f_yuJcMbIUf4YBHOsC7bJWl8EYTEcigpzuvGA at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjs&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Replace: "/" with "or"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRd2opzZZhJbu-Vmq58AFc5kSzZglNGMdlpd-EfUNYnTGJG1tCBLgngQ4ig43ifIQEqvy13olOc7vHAlVCzEAKpxus7VMi9SF61V17LQOnDMX4YJ5Z8 at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjo&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Replace: "/" with "or"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdbfZv_oRb_o0GRnR2pdKREeAgGA_RueKlBjx9GlaSIuZ8fumyGRpsUam42uyrzDNWkvwF7VwcqJt1ve7ScFca_9JdGFYI6Dus80AkjP_2yD14OfUA at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjk&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Delete: "wish"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcH66en_U6q1tVy2P0PmNhnOSlbf6ojlKqFem1MnvDIEZHl-lAjzqr-5q5FVd5LdARAtzKn_0omg9A_fRJ4_6dbQhkP6ph6m1SzbOU9nblAZxhcchM at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjg&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Replace: "Should" with "It would not be appropriate for"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcs3N9YUmMy-cw55LzT1AOLwiTKSJPGSCElvDK2AGybQGPNP_yBvC2lnZjA-RJOByg4fjn3P7u5cnd0AQYOsns_3hTF9tCxqNbu_zZeeI14CRoyItI at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjc&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Add: "In addition:"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcOh-rxK36Hz_xPQzPduMAdvtSA1AUAfb4avUkbmNtY0w79Taztjd10-tUt22PeOQWBRq1gJWPwg-zA_sLYzzlw_7PVHFmGlwFeijSheHFbXHWOntc at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SjY&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Add: "shall"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRc9L1FDN9D6Bk54nkDn0RHPqdkV0GE1qLX12R0WjAKP_Wixsk7nM77Esn-HHZDky3CQ12r1YfbOCzSvUcW3KQmpPtjjYSoEEOs6rGp-FZeiFo46GOA at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SjU&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Delete: "Council recommends the"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRclWjwBQ4PkGBQ03bnTQ3Y7rEAVrcVOMhTSVZ0WyIyGaTotxsdVYNS8uCrDQTz2pFqEK5UsYaU2AM1k8rOuy-D74kw8HnXgd0TYpVhyMTaz2OLy5_A at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SjQ&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Add: "GNSO"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRfvvrsA4zg3SEsl5lQTLxLMQt7HUsPNmbwOgRAnY4uJw02YhQ3XUI3yh4YlzsAv1QTg_guy4AUo83arzb4MANhLJ3qrAq6K1tZXunrVpJWbSgDk9Tc at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SjM&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Add: "Given the importance of this working group it is recommended that the liaison be ex-officio a member…"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRd48AH_cc4V3-PtbrsaPWGr85ZVUFk9FMXdg5MR8Jz9eO8bWXxpTG4hscm0GpAMcG3BIjFyCb1fk7FkG02fdjzwVLyNBGR8SBE18f7uN9ZfF1WU2Ug at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Si0&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Delete space
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdQb4Q-jUmSEth8mlCU3_2s5U_UWlIZ8Q8jiYO4zuigP0KYH6C7E64f0aPxi2lP0tvmzh9DVKGAaqaH5-21QZy9HajbyX_t6QF_ecDMGXDq6aZsPGU at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SiU&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Add: "is practical if"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpReznISg-covFsT4Yipg17znQ0KJLCA7Gzb58C9V85vbqREbTA05nnrjkOF6VVgAY-vRzyw9YHQDxfHxo0OfkmdN4MXouGNIO-tcf4Vm_TvmXIkZaDM at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SiQ&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Add: "adequate"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdg1jJ0a1dU0jOfyGPSsY7jWCe3bVRdO8QG18rfENCjmS2fNdE1EnjbcG6-NJ3B80WTdVuY8URUxEIMe-wNAz4lNw2PljgkKBqnrDQdoJojXqO2Z2o at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SiM&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Add: "in order"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRfZXu2qFRoffIR7ydUr9B1ppaPJS086J056m33c3-EKVherShwOoXIFeAFdnkF89rwQR0ZVdsA4eq8I9z8ZwsWhlfQBeyMZnuHs1i1dqicxpA9dOIc at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SiI&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Delete space
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> Add: "-"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRd684qP9DR42OeKJt5ln9RoB0gBwbbuKsEqeVoxrYT3zllxfoOklpdONRAPQ6DJGXKSps92s7lI65ORYJaBrkG3ANxgbGffrdH818BgfenntHKk3NQ at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SiE&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Delete space
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> Add: "-"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpReB_v8CA4vDSQmmfKtgJDQ3NEzerqSixIVQ71H7Sm931k8qODTLrli2t6zK3Dmhjjl-ILLiwcpHPm_yWCopBxVkWpwlwPW_B8kknjneR80E2j-V-68 at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SiA&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
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> Delete: "do his/her best to"
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> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
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> Rejected suggestion
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> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdKyb2XX0A0rlr5UFohwrQ33G3ceqzTBG_MJ9MvUJcISSf6mFfHzr7RjaBXHnnnW-3vvHlZ2RiArxZFXU1bS5FmjOOzE-kPf4AudfxLb8n5fqoLPRM at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sh8&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
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