[NCSG-PC] Fwd: EDPD Leadership Comments Table

Fri Jul 6 04:54:21 EEST 2018

Hi,

I think the edits were reinstated. Marika sent communication a few hours
ago:

"As a reminder, please do not redline the current text in the charter which
appears in the first section of the document, but instead, please provide
your comments / proposed edits as part of the comments / suggestions
section."

Best,

Rafik

Le ven. 6 juil. 2018 à 09:19, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a
écrit :

> All of my edits were rejected. Good luck to everyone else who spends their
> afternoon reviewing the 8 different Google Docs. I hope some of you edits
> are accepted...
>
> Ayden
>
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> From: Marika Konings (Google Docs) <
> d+MTEwMTI0MDYyNTI4MDYxMzUzOTA3-MTEyMDY2MDg3OTg4NTE1NjM0MDc2 at docs.google.com>
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> Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2018 at 00:02
> Subject: EDPD Leadership Comments Table
> To: <hostime at gmail.com>
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> Marika Konings resolved suggestions in EDPD Leadership Comments Table
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkM&ts=5b3e955f&usp=comment_email_document>
> *Resolved*
> 24 rejected suggestions
> Resolved
> Suggestions
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
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> Add: "as and"
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> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdXYXig_LvoskS-eBAVneoHTeLxPvHJPSP55DaxF37Na774RnMwVSeXxoKr_LRYzOthC-cphLDgiyPpwKbsMg0DcFykP62JGgTt5OIuuumY3uveUu4 at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkM&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Replace: "versus. participating as an EPDP Team member" with ", and not
> to make personal interventions"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpReN0nGb6rPmqGoJmhr6A019xuRbQsZP5tmJVHqGSg-A4HoCnipfPwwxbB6dTadkPzCT5fpEkRXNkqROvLV34906wyM0Yz9GCVECpn8myqTS3suoeqg at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkI&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Replace: "her" with "the EPDP in their official"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcocxvV6fJMlU34sYNiXR3tjhbkV547x6mgPvUQxBFhV8gwOQJFMlMTgpR0mz2CmPvvc064Yo6GsIrjrQN1BRimwbS64VGe-Z4Ao_jO-QSQ3Wv88VM at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkE&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Replace: "Will make clear when he/she is acting" with "Only participate"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcz8Ho21DqHezbWyCk22b7jPW_xdmcw3oXWUrttIIV_supO65J3lmc8qCGsdIhOBbrTosqpTaAATPciNG_qeLdQFw45pOqDduslo9UW0qMkLQ7jgPQ at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkA&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Replace: "in" with "on calls in their official"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdDiYY7WbBShhMG6P6-xMh8dbtEpOnaja2fW94P2po3XzWFwy3cuBoGRLGmjC70CxTVwD8FPRmz7ztXijhc1gJftgMpFvflLUotugR9HBLjvfnnfsY at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sj4&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Delete: "ing"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRfTznDurVJ-EdwUPgYXbhKOTfRMwc3xWh-RxfjbNCl8xkdgW92dgO_WKPrFRS_dmAD8tKP_hPiv2OIsMRniQOiuQ5raWHZwz-jQ3AwWE1mvwUF2BVw at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sj0&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Replace: "make it explicitly clear when he/she is" with "channel such
> comments through the representatives of his or her Stakeholder Group, and
> to only"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRd219ABodPg_BH4cT5ZM2sny8sshk3d4KPI8np1ZjTeLhXLrz5quwjVscl7tQsnS1KcWHUGPY1_eCR1fsNTg_oNxYJ58bcNYhsY1JJZnkeRzAbfu78 at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjw&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Replace: "," with ";"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcFN2ClhUO6T4rIqp8NORym59WLlF6OLCrcDDC4scoykyFK9c1lhuU6begRodUzBU_k-T7zuA76E9f_yuJcMbIUf4YBHOsC7bJWl8EYTEcigpzuvGA at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjs&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Replace: "/" with "or"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRd2opzZZhJbu-Vmq58AFc5kSzZglNGMdlpd-EfUNYnTGJG1tCBLgngQ4ig43ifIQEqvy13olOc7vHAlVCzEAKpxus7VMi9SF61V17LQOnDMX4YJ5Z8 at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjo&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Replace: "/" with "or"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdbfZv_oRb_o0GRnR2pdKREeAgGA_RueKlBjx9GlaSIuZ8fumyGRpsUam42uyrzDNWkvwF7VwcqJt1ve7ScFca_9JdGFYI6Dus80AkjP_2yD14OfUA at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjk&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Delete: "wish"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcH66en_U6q1tVy2P0PmNhnOSlbf6ojlKqFem1MnvDIEZHl-lAjzqr-5q5FVd5LdARAtzKn_0omg9A_fRJ4_6dbQhkP6ph6m1SzbOU9nblAZxhcchM at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjg&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Replace: "Should" with "It would not be appropriate for"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcs3N9YUmMy-cw55LzT1AOLwiTKSJPGSCElvDK2AGybQGPNP_yBvC2lnZjA-RJOByg4fjn3P7u5cnd0AQYOsns_3hTF9tCxqNbu_zZeeI14CRoyItI at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjc&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Add: "In addition:"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcOh-rxK36Hz_xPQzPduMAdvtSA1AUAfb4avUkbmNtY0w79Taztjd10-tUt22PeOQWBRq1gJWPwg-zA_sLYzzlw_7PVHFmGlwFeijSheHFbXHWOntc at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SjY&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
> Add: "shall"
>
> [image: Marika Konings]
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Rejected suggestion*
> Reply
> <Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRc9L1FDN9D6Bk54nkDn0RHPqdkV0GE1qLX12R0WjAKP_Wixsk7nM77Esn-HHZDky3CQ12r1YfbOCzSvUcW3KQmpPtjjYSoEEOs6rGp-FZeiFo46GOA at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table>
> Open
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SjU&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f>
> [image: Ayden Férdeline]
> *Ayden Férdeline*
>
>
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