[NCSG-PC] Public comment on Ombuds Office

[Ayden Férdeline]

Thanks for this, Tanya. I've made some minor edits to the document now, making the language a little more forceful, where appropriate, and also expanding upon the third point. Thanks for considering accepting them.

—Ayden

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> Subject: [NCSG-PC] Public comment on Ombuds Office
> Local Time: 4 January 2018 4:07 PM
> UTC Time: 4 January 2018 15:07
> From: t.tropina at mpicc.de
> To: ncsg-pc <ncsg-pc at lists.ncsg.is>
>
> Dear all,
>
> Farzaneh and I drafted a comment on the CCWG-Accountability Work Stream
> 2 (WS2) draft recommendations on the ICANN Ombuds Office (IOO). The call
> for comment and all the documents related to it could be found here:
> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ioo-recs-2017-11-10-en.
>
> Our draft is here:
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LrMcu3zsTTyk1DG-2dbBMgzwjjxYxl-aHaYIS-iIGpQ/edit?usp=sharing
>
> I will share the document with the list in the incoming days, would be
> grateful if PC comments and amends it first -- or at least if you let
> us, the penholders, know that you are comfortable with it. The deadline
> is 14th of January, so we have some time, but would be great if it
> remains open for comments from our membership, too.
>
> Cheers,
>
> Tanya
>
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