[NCSG-PC] [Urgent] review the NCSG comment on EPDP initial report

[Ayden Férdeline]

Thanks, Rafik-

I have now re-reviewed our comment and resolved the conflicts. I have also trimmed down some of our responses in the interest of clarity. So please do not be offended if I have deleted some of the text that you added. If you have any concerns please let me know ASAP. I will be submitting our comment in 12 hours time, at 22:00 UTC. Thanks!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iRZUXqSUJ2FaPEeytbH28wJmRamsmio-kzijQmBF2IE/edit?ts=5c1c7fb5#

Best wishes, Ayden

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On Friday, 21 December 2018 14:19, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi all.
>
> You may have seen the reminders about comment deadline which is today. I will go through the google doc in coming hours to resolve the edits and tidy-up the responses. Please keep reviewing.
> I also asked EPDP NCSG representatives to review the document to check consistency.
>
> When the draft is finalized and no objection made, I will ask Ayden to fill the google form. He kindly accepted to do so since I am council liaison and vice chair in EPDP team it will be inappropriate for me to submit the NCSG comment for this case.
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
> On Fri, Dec 14, 2018, 23:56 Martin Pablo Silva Valent <mpsilvavalent at gmail.com wrote:
>
>> Very good work, and thank you all that put something into it. I have no further comment on it and support the submission.
>>
>> Best,
>> Martin
>>
>> On Fri, Dec 14, 2018, 08:33 Tatiana Tropina <tatiana.tropina at gmail.com wrote:
>>
>>> I support the submission. Many thanks to those who worked on it.
>>> Cheers,
>>> Tanya
>>>
>>> On Fri 14. Dec 2018 at 05:47, Elsa S <elsa.saade at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hi Rafik,
>>>>
>>>> I've reviewed the comment. Added suggestions and a couple of comments. I think it generally looks good to go!
>>>>
>>>> E.
>>>> --
>>>>
>>>> On Thu, Dec 13, 2018 at 9:00 PM Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi all,
>>>>>
>>>>> this is critical and urgent. The deadline for submission is quite strict.
>>>>> please review and comment the draft response to EPDP initial report.
>>>>>
>>>>> Best Regards,
>>>>>
>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>
>>>>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
>>>>>
>>>>> Hi all,
>>>>>
>>>>> The representatives to EPDP team prepared a draft comment from NCSG on the initial report. You can find it here https://docs.google.com/a/mozillafoundation.org/document/d/1iRZUXqSUJ2FaPEeytbH28wJmRamsmio-kzijQmBF2IE/edit . You can find the initial report here https://www.icann.org/public-comments/epdp-gtld-registration-data-specs-initial-2018-11-21-en. The deadline for submission is the 21st December.
>>>>>
>>>>> The public comment is using google form, that explains why the draft may look long as it includes the questions and explanation. Our draft responses are in red.
>>>>> This public comment is an important milestone for EPDP and for NCSG to submit the comment. It is also important to encourage to have more input.
>>>>>
>>>>> Best Regards,
>>>>>
>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>
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