[NCSG-PC] [Urgent] review the NCSG comment on EPDP initial report

[Rafik Dammak]

Hi,

the document is finalized and clean. last reviews were done by some of
representatives to EPDP and consistency checked. after re-reading it
several times, I do believe it looks good .
there was no objection and  there was already support for the comment, I
think it is ready to be submitted.
@Ayden please go ahead and fill the form when you are ready. thanks again
for volunteering.

Best,

Rafik
Le ven. 21 déc. 2018 à 18:58, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a
écrit :

> Thanks, Rafik-
>
> I have now re-reviewed our comment and resolved the conflicts. I have also
> trimmed down some of our responses in the interest of clarity. So please do
> not be offended if I have deleted some of the text that you added. If you
> have any concerns please let me know ASAP. *I will be submitting our
> comment in 12 hours time*, at 22:00 UTC. Thanks!
>
>
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iRZUXqSUJ2FaPEeytbH28wJmRamsmio-kzijQmBF2IE/edit?ts=5c1c7fb5#
>
> Best wishes, Ayden
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On Friday, 21 December 2018 14:19, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> Hi all.
>
> You may have seen the reminders about comment deadline which is today. I
> will go through the google doc in coming hours to resolve the edits and
> tidy-up the responses. Please keep reviewing.
> I also asked EPDP NCSG representatives to review the document to check
> consistency.
>
> When the draft is finalized and no objection made, I will ask Ayden to
> fill the google form. He kindly accepted to do so since I am council
> liaison and vice chair in EPDP team it will be inappropriate for me to
> submit the NCSG comment for this case.
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
> On Fri, Dec 14, 2018, 23:56 Martin Pablo Silva Valent <
> mpsilvavalent at gmail.com wrote:
>
>> Very good work, and thank you all that put something into it. I have no
>> further comment on it and support the submission.
>>
>>
>> Best,
>> Martin
>>
>> On Fri, Dec 14, 2018, 08:33 Tatiana Tropina <tatiana.tropina at gmail.com
>> wrote:
>>
>>> I support the submission. Many thanks to those who worked on it.
>>> Cheers,
>>> Tanya
>>>
>>> On Fri 14. Dec 2018 at 05:47, Elsa S <elsa.saade at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hi Rafik,
>>>>
>>>> I've reviewed the comment. Added suggestions and a couple of comments.
>>>> I think it generally looks good to go!
>>>>
>>>> E.
>>>> --
>>>>
>>>> On Thu, Dec 13, 2018 at 9:00 PM Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi all,
>>>>>
>>>>> this is critical and urgent. The deadline for submission is quite
>>>>> strict.
>>>>> please review and comment the draft response to EPDP initial report.
>>>>>
>>>>> Best Regards,
>>>>>
>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>
>>>>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
>>>>>
>>>>> Hi all,
>>>>>
>>>>> The representatives to EPDP team prepared a draft comment from NCSG on
>>>>> the initial report. You can find it here
>>>>> https://docs.google.com/a/mozillafoundation.org/document/d/1iRZUXqSUJ2FaPEeytbH28wJmRamsmio-kzijQmBF2IE/edit
>>>>> . You can find the initial report here
>>>>> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/epdp-gtld-registration-data-specs-initial-2018-11-21-en.
>>>>> The deadline for submission is the 21st December.
>>>>>
>>>>> The public comment is using google form, that explains why the draft
>>>>> may look long as it includes the questions and explanation. Our draft
>>>>> responses are in red.
>>>>> This public comment is an important milestone for EPDP and for NCSG to
>>>>> submit the comment. It is also important to encourage to have more input.
>>>>>
>>>>> Best Regards,
>>>>>
>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>
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>>>>
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>>>>
>>>> Elsa Saade
>>>> Consultant
>>>> Gulf Centre for Human Rights
>>>> Twitter: @Elsa_Saade
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