[NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG

[avri doria]

hi,

its file ->  revision history then pick the version you want to compare to.

avri


On 19-Apr-17 21:40, Stephanie Perrin wrote:
>
> Rafik pointed out that it was not clear what to do with the notes.  I
> added yet another recommendation to deal with the privacy policy
> required to clarify rights under the whistleblower policy, and deleted
> the rest.  I neglected to keep a copy so I hope someone else did or
> can explain to me how to get back to an earlier version.  I am not in
> the habit of working in Google docs...
>
> Regards
>
> Stephanie Perrin
>
>
> On 2017-04-19 12:29, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
>> Thanks for these edits, Stephanie. I support the comment as it now
>> stands, particularly with the inclusion of the eighth recommendation.
>>
>> Best wishes,
>> Ayden
>>
>>
>>> -------- Original Message --------
>>> Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG
>>> Local Time: 19 April 2017 4:50 PM
>>> UTC Time: 19 April 2017 15:50
>>> From: stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca
>>> To: ncsg-pc at lists.ncsg.is
>>>
>>>
>>> Ok I added my note on the integrated policy suite issue to the doc
>>> as recommendation 8, and picked up some grammaticals.
>>>
>>> I had checked with Herb, that hotline policy is a California
>>> requirement so this explains its orphan status...they had to whip
>>> one up.
>>>
>>> cheers steph and sorry for the delay, was swamped
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On 2017-04-19 08:22, Rafik Dammak wrote:
>>>> Hi Matt,
>>>>
>>>> thanks for leading on this statement, I hope that we can get the PC
>>>> endorsement this time.
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Rafik
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> 2017-04-19 17:33 GMT+09:00 Matthew Shears <matthew at intpolicy.com
>>>> <mailto:matthew at intpolicy.com>>:
>>>>
>>>>     Hi all
>>>>
>>>>     We are late with this submission but it is important that it be
>>>>     submitted.
>>>>
>>>>     I have accepted most of the suggested additions/changes and
>>>>     cleaned up this text.
>>>>
>>>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing
>>>>     <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing>
>>>>
>>>>     Please review carefully.   Michael - would appreciate your read
>>>>     through as well.
>>>>
>>>>     I would like to submit this at the latest on Friday so please
>>>>     review and make final comments/edits by 23:59 UTC Thursday 20
>>>>     April.
>>>>
>>>>     Please indicate your support for the comments to the PC list or
>>>>     in the doc.
>>>>
>>>>     Thanks!
>>>>
>>>>     Matthew
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>     -- 
>>>>     Matthew Shears
>>>>     matthew at intpolicy.com <mailto:matthew at intpolicy.com>
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