[NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG

[Stephanie Perrin]

Rafik pointed out that it was not clear what to do with the notes.  I 
added yet another recommendation to deal with the privacy policy 
required to clarify rights under the whistleblower policy, and deleted 
the rest.  I neglected to keep a copy so I hope someone else did or can 
explain to me how to get back to an earlier version.  I am not in the 
habit of working in Google docs...

Regards

Stephanie Perrin


On 2017-04-19 12:29, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
> Thanks for these edits, Stephanie. I support the comment as it now 
> stands, particularly with the inclusion of the eighth recommendation.
>
> Best wishes,
> Ayden
>
>
>> -------- Original Message --------
>> Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG
>> Local Time: 19 April 2017 4:50 PM
>> UTC Time: 19 April 2017 15:50
>> From: stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca
>> To: ncsg-pc at lists.ncsg.is
>>
>>
>> Ok I added my note on the integrated policy suite issue to the doc as 
>> recommendation 8, and picked up some grammaticals.
>>
>> I had checked with Herb, that hotline policy is a California 
>> requirement so this explains its orphan status...they had to whip one up.
>>
>> cheers steph and sorry for the delay, was swamped
>>
>>
>>
>> On 2017-04-19 08:22, Rafik Dammak wrote:
>>> Hi Matt,
>>>
>>> thanks for leading on this statement, I hope that we can get the PC 
>>> endorsement this time.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>>
>>> 2017-04-19 17:33 GMT+09:00 Matthew Shears <matthew at intpolicy.com 
>>> <mailto:matthew at intpolicy.com>>:
>>>
>>>     Hi all
>>>
>>>     We are late with this submission but it is important that it be
>>>     submitted.
>>>
>>>     I have accepted most of the suggested additions/changes and
>>>     cleaned up this text.
>>>
>>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing
>>>     <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing>
>>>
>>>     Please review carefully.   Michael - would appreciate your read
>>>     through as well.
>>>
>>>     I would like to submit this at the latest on Friday so please
>>>     review and make final comments/edits by 23:59 UTC Thursday 20 April.
>>>
>>>     Please indicate your support for the comments to the PC list or
>>>     in the doc.
>>>
>>>     Thanks!
>>>
>>>     Matthew
>>>
>>>
>>>     -- 
>>>     Matthew Shears
>>>     matthew at intpolicy.com <mailto:matthew at intpolicy.com>
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