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    <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Rafik pointed out that
          it was not clear what to do with the notes.  I added yet
          another recommendation to deal with the privacy policy
          required to clarify rights under the whistleblower policy, and
          deleted the rest.  I neglected to keep a copy so I hope
          someone else did or can explain to me how to get back to an
          earlier version.  I am not in the habit of working in Google
          docs...</font></font></p>
    <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Regards <br>
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    <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Stephanie Perrin</font></font><br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2017-04-19 12:29, Ayden Férdeline
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      <div>Thanks for these edits, Stephanie. I support the comment as
        it now stands, particularly with the inclusion of the eighth
        recommendation.<br>
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        Best wishes,<br>
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          <div>Ayden <br>
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        <div>-------- Original Message --------<br>
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        <div>Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from
          NCSG<br>
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        <div>Local Time: 19 April 2017 4:50 PM<br>
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        <div>UTC Time: 19 April 2017 15:50<br>
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        <div>From: <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a><br>
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        <div>To: <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a><br>
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        <p><span class="size" style="font-size:undefinedpx"><span
              class="font" style="font-family:Lucida Grande">Ok I added
              my note on the integrated policy suite issue to the doc as
              recommendation 8, and picked up some grammaticals.</span></span><br>
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        <p><span class="size" style="font-size:undefinedpx"><span
              class="font" style="font-family:Lucida Grande">I had
              checked with Herb, that hotline policy is a California
              requirement so this explains its orphan status...they had
              to whip one up.</span></span><br>
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        <p><span class="size" style="font-size:undefinedpx"><span
              class="font" style="font-family:Lucida Grande">cheers
              steph and sorry for the delay, was swamped</span></span><br>
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        <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2017-04-19 08:22, Rafik Dammak
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            <div class="gmail_extra">Hi Matt,<br>
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            <div class="gmail_extra">thanks for leading on this
              statement, I hope that we can get the PC endorsement this
              time.<br>
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            <div class="gmail_extra">Best,<br>
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              <div>Rafik<br>
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                <div>2017-04-19 17:33 GMT+09:00 Matthew Shears <span
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                  <div>Hi all<br>
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                  <div> We are late with this submission but it is
                    important that it be submitted.<br>
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                  <div> I have accepted most of the suggested
                    additions/changes and cleaned up this text.<br>
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href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/docume<wbr>nt/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDv<wbr>sNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=s<wbr>haring</a><br>
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                  <div> Please review carefully.   Michael - would
                    appreciate your read through as well.<br>
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                  <div> I would like to submit this at the latest on
                    Friday so please review and make final
                    comments/edits by 23:59 UTC Thursday 20 April.<br>
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                  <div> Please indicate your support for the comments to
                    the PC list or in the doc.<br>
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                  <div> Thanks!<span class="HOEnZb"><span class="colour"
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                        Matthew<br>
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