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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Rafik pointed out that
it was not clear what to do with the notes. I added yet
another recommendation to deal with the privacy policy
required to clarify rights under the whistleblower policy, and
deleted the rest. I neglected to keep a copy so I hope
someone else did or can explain to me how to get back to an
earlier version. I am not in the habit of working in Google
docs...</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Regards <br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Stephanie Perrin</font></font><br>
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<div>Thanks for these edits, Stephanie. I support the comment as
it now stands, particularly with the inclusion of the eighth
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<div>Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from
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<div>Local Time: 19 April 2017 4:50 PM<br>
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<p><span class="size" style="font-size:undefinedpx"><span
class="font" style="font-family:Lucida Grande">Ok I added
my note on the integrated policy suite issue to the doc as
recommendation 8, and picked up some grammaticals.</span></span><br>
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<p><span class="size" style="font-size:undefinedpx"><span
class="font" style="font-family:Lucida Grande">I had
checked with Herb, that hotline policy is a California
requirement so this explains its orphan status...they had
to whip one up.</span></span><br>
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steph and sorry for the delay, was swamped</span></span><br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2017-04-19 08:22, Rafik Dammak
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<div class="gmail_extra">thanks for leading on this
statement, I hope that we can get the PC endorsement this
time.<br>
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<div> We are late with this submission but it is
important that it be submitted.<br>
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<div> I have accepted most of the suggested
additions/changes and cleaned up this text.<br>
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<div> Please review carefully. Michael - would
appreciate your read through as well.<br>
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<div> I would like to submit this at the latest on
Friday so please review and make final
comments/edits by 23:59 UTC Thursday 20 April.<br>
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