[NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG

[Michael Karanicolas]

This looks excellent to me. Congratulations to all on your outstanding work.

On Wed, Apr 19, 2017 at 5:33 AM, Matthew Shears <matthew at intpolicy.com> wrote:
> Hi all
>
> We are late with this submission but it is important that it be submitted.
>
> I have accepted most of the suggested additions/changes and cleaned up this
> text.
>
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing
>
> Please review carefully.   Michael - would appreciate your read through as
> well.
>
> I would like to submit this at the latest on Friday so please review and
> make final comments/edits by 23:59 UTC Thursday 20 April.
>
> Please indicate your support for the comments to the PC list or in the doc.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Matthew
>
>
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