[NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG

[Ayden Férdeline]

Thanks for these edits, Stephanie. I support the comment as it now stands, particularly with the inclusion of the eighth recommendation.

Best wishes,

Ayden

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Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG
Local Time: 19 April 2017 4:50 PM
UTC Time: 19 April 2017 15:50
From: stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca
To: ncsg-pc at lists.ncsg.is

Ok I added my note on the integrated policy suite issue to the doc as recommendation 8, and picked up some grammaticals.

I had checked with Herb, that hotline policy is a California requirement so this explains its orphan status...they had to whip one up.

cheers steph and sorry for the delay, was swamped

On 2017-04-19 08:22, Rafik Dammak wrote:

Hi Matt,

thanks for leading on this statement, I hope that we can get the PC endorsement this time.

Best,

Rafik

2017-04-19 17:33 GMT+09:00 Matthew Shears <matthew at intpolicy.com>:

Hi all

We are late with this submission but it is important that it be submitted.

I have accepted most of the suggested additions/changes and cleaned up this text.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing

Please review carefully. Michael - would appreciate your read through as well.

I would like to submit this at the latest on Friday so please review and make final comments/edits by 23:59 UTC Thursday 20 April.

Please indicate your support for the comments to the PC list or in the doc.

Thanks!

Matthew

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