<div>Thanks for these edits, Stephanie. I support the comment as it now stands, particularly with the inclusion of the eighth recommendation.<br><br>Best wishes,<br></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block "><div class="protonmail_signature_block-user "><div>Ayden <br></div></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block-proton protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><blockquote class="protonmail_quote" type="cite"><div>-------- Original Message --------<br></div><div>Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG<br></div><div>Local Time: 19 April 2017 4:50 PM<br></div><div>UTC Time: 19 April 2017 15:50<br></div><div>From: stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca<br></div><div>To: ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is<br></div><div><br></div><div> <br></div><p><span class="size" style="font-size:undefinedpx"><span class="font" style="font-family:Lucida Grande">Ok I added my note on
the integrated policy suite issue to the doc as recommendation
8, and picked up some grammaticals.</span></span><br></p><p><span class="size" style="font-size:undefinedpx"><span class="font" style="font-family:Lucida Grande">I had checked with
Herb, that hotline policy is a California requirement so this
explains its orphan status...they had to whip one up.</span></span><br></p><p><span class="size" style="font-size:undefinedpx"><span class="font" style="font-family:Lucida Grande">cheers steph and sorry
for the delay, was swamped</span></span><br></p><p><span class="size" style="font-size:undefinedpx"><span class="font" style="font-family:Lucida Grande"></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2017-04-19 08:22, Rafik Dammak
wrote:<br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_extra">Hi Matt,<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">thanks for leading on this statement, I
hope that we can get the PC endorsement this time.<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Best,<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><div>Rafik<br></div><div> <br></div><div> <br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div>2017-04-19 17:33 GMT+09:00 Matthew
Shears <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:matthew@intpolicy.com" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener">matthew@intpolicy.com</a>></span>:<br></div><div> <br></div><blockquote style="margin:0 0 0
.8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex" class="gmail_quote"><div>Hi all<br></div><div> <br></div><div> We are late with this submission but it is important that
it be submitted.<br></div><div> <br></div><div> I have accepted most of the suggested additions/changes
and cleaned up this text.<br></div><div> <br></div><div> <a rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/docume<wbr>nt/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDv<wbr>sNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=s<wbr>haring</a><br></div><div> <br></div><div> Please review carefully. Michael - would appreciate your
read through as well.<br></div><div> <br></div><div> I would like to submit this at the latest on Friday so
please review and make final comments/edits by 23:59 UTC
Thursday 20 April.<br></div><div> <br></div><div> Please indicate your support for the comments to the PC
list or in the doc.<br></div><div> <br></div><div> Thanks!<span class="HOEnZb"><span class="colour" style="color:#888888"><br> <br> Matthew<br> <br> <br> -- <br> Matthew Shears<br> <a href="mailto:matthew@intpolicy.com" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener">matthew@intpolicy.com</a><br> <a value="+447712472987" href="tel:%2B447712472987" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener">+447712472987</a><br> <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext">Skype:mshears</a><br> <br> ______________________________<wbr>_________________<br> NCSG-PC mailing list<br> <a href="mailto:NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener">NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is</a><br> <a rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" href="https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/listinfo/ncsg-pc">https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/<wbr>listinfo/ncsg-pc</a></span></span></div></blockquote></div><div><br></div></div></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><pre wrap="">_______________________________________________
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