[NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG

[Matthew Shears]

Hi Ayden - absolutely.  I incorporated the specific recommendations 
Stephanie made but would be delighted for more to be integrated.

Matthew


On 19/04/2017 11:53, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
> Thanks for shepherding this comment, Matthew.
>
> I have now reviewed the comment and would like to express my support 
> for it being filed. Is it, however, possible that Stephanie's 
> insightful note at the conclusion of the Google Doc can in some way be 
> integrated into the comment?
>
> Best wishes,
>
> Ayden
>
>
>> -------- Original Message --------
>> Subject: [NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG
>> Local Time: 19 April 2017 9:33 AM
>> UTC Time: 19 April 2017 08:33
>> From: matthew at intpolicy.com
>> To: ncsg-pc <ncsg-pc at lists.ncsg.is>, Michael Karanicolas 
>> <michael at law-democracy.org>
>>
>> Hi all
>>
>> We are late with this submission but it is important that it be 
>> submitted.
>>
>> I have accepted most of the suggested additions/changes and cleaned up
>> this text.
>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing
>>
>> Please review carefully. Michael - would appreciate your read through
>> as well.
>>
>> I would like to submit this at the latest on Friday so please review and
>> make final comments/edits by 23:59 UTC Thursday 20 April.
>>
>> Please indicate your support for the comments to the PC list or in 
>> the doc.
>>
>> Thanks!
>>
>> Matthew
>>
>>
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>> +447712472987
>> Skype:mshears
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