[NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG

[Ayden Férdeline]

Thanks for shepherding this comment, Matthew.

I have now reviewed the comment and would like to express my support for it being filed. Is it, however, possible that Stephanie's insightful note at the conclusion of the Google Doc can in some way be integrated into the comment?

Best wishes,

Ayden

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Subject: [NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG
Local Time: 19 April 2017 9:33 AM
UTC Time: 19 April 2017 08:33
From: matthew at intpolicy.com
To: ncsg-pc <ncsg-pc at lists.ncsg.is>, Michael Karanicolas <michael at law-democracy.org>

Hi all

We are late with this submission but it is important that it be submitted.

I have accepted most of the suggested additions/changes and cleaned up
this text.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing

Please review carefully. Michael - would appreciate your read through
as well.

I would like to submit this at the latest on Friday so please review and
make final comments/edits by 23:59 UTC Thursday 20 April.

Please indicate your support for the comments to the PC list or in the doc.

Thanks!

Matthew

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