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<p>Hi Ayden - absolutely. I incorporated the specific
recommendations Stephanie made but would be delighted for more to
be integrated.</p>
<p>Matthew<br>
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<div>Thanks for shepherding this comment, Matthew. <br>
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I have now reviewed the comment and would like to express my
support for it being filed. Is it, however, possible that
Stephanie's insightful note at the conclusion of the Google Doc
can in some way be integrated into the comment?<br>
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<div>Subject: [NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG<br>
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<div>Local Time: 19 April 2017 9:33 AM<br>
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<div>From: <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:matthew@intpolicy.com">matthew@intpolicy.com</a><br>
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<div>To: ncsg-pc <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is"><ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is></a>, Michael
Karanicolas <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:michael@law-democracy.org"><michael@law-democracy.org></a><br>
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<div>Hi all<br>
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<div> We are late with this submission but it is important that
it be submitted.<br>
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<div> I have accepted most of the suggested additions/changes
and cleaned up <br>
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<div> this text.<br>
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<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing</a><br>
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<div> Please review carefully. Michael - would appreciate your
read through <br>
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<div> as well.<br>
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<div> I would like to submit this at the latest on Friday so
please review and <br>
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<div> make final comments/edits by 23:59 UTC Thursday 20 April.<br>
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<div> Please indicate your support for the comments to the PC
list or in the doc.<br>
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<div> Thanks!<br>
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<div> Matthew<br>
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