[PC-NCSG] .Travel public comment

[Amr Elsadr]

Hi,

Also like Marilia?s word-smithing, and agree with her first comment. We should probably stick to process, not substance. The argument on substance should take place on a PDP WG, which we have been deprived of.

Thanks.

Amr

On Jun 21, 2015, at 11:12 PM, William Drake <wjdrake at gmail.com> wrote:

> I am for a bit softer, thanks
> 
> BD
> 
>> On Jun 21, 2015, at 6:03 PM, Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hello all,
>> 
>> Please find it attached with a few suggestions. I believe that we make clear that staff is acting inappropriately, so I suggested the softening of some language with regards to that.
>> 
>> Thanks 
>> Mar?lia
>> 
>>  
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> On Sun, Jun 21, 2015 at 5:58 PM, David Cake <dave at difference.com.au> wrote:
>> Looks great to me. A strong statement of the problem as done here is just what is needed.
>> 
>> Cheers
>> 
>> David
>> 
>> > On 21 Jun 2015, at 5:49 pm, Robin Gross <robin at ipjustice.org> wrote:
>> >
>> > Excellent work, Ed and Stephanie!   Thank you so much for pulling this together in time for submission.
>> >
>> > Best,
>> > Robin
>> >
>> > On Jun 21, 2015, at 1:41 PM, Edward Morris wrote:
>> >
>> >> Thanks Stephanie!
>> >>
>> >> More input welcome...
>> >>
>> >> Thanks,
>> >>
>> >> Ed
>> >>
>> >> Sent from my iPhone
>> >>
>> >>> On Jun 21, 2015, at 4:58 PM, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca> wrote:
>> >>>
>> >>> I have made a few editorial revisions...I am taking on board the idea that this should be a strong condemnation of staff free-wheeling, but it is pretty direct.   I like it though, and thanks for whipping it up so quickly...one more thing, the title should have something in there about what it is, too vague right now....
>> >>> attached in markup
>> >>> Steph
>> >>>> On 2015-06-21 16:45, Edward Morris wrote:
>> >>>> HI all,
>> >>>>
>> >>>> Attached find a rather rushed public comment proposed for NCSG to submit on .travel. Please take a look, correct, make better etc. If we're going to get something in we need to approve it at tonight's meeting and submit before 8 p.m. Argentina time tonight.
>> >>>>
>> >>>> Thanks,
>> >>>>
>> >>>> Ed
>> >>>
>> >>> <draft .travel pcsp.docx>
>> >>
>> >
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