[PC-NCSG] .Travel public comment

[William Drake]

I am for a bit softer, thanks

BD

> On Jun 21, 2015, at 6:03 PM, Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hello all,
> 
> Please find it attached with a few suggestions. I believe that we make clear that staff is acting inappropriately, so I suggested the softening of some language with regards to that.
> 
> Thanks 
> Mar?lia
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> On Sun, Jun 21, 2015 at 5:58 PM, David Cake <dave at difference.com.au <mailto:dave at difference.com.au>> wrote:
> Looks great to me. A strong statement of the problem as done here is just what is needed.
> 
> Cheers
> 
> David
> 
> > On 21 Jun 2015, at 5:49 pm, Robin Gross <robin at ipjustice.org <mailto:robin at ipjustice.org>> wrote:
> >
> > Excellent work, Ed and Stephanie!   Thank you so much for pulling this together in time for submission.
> >
> > Best,
> > Robin
> >
> > On Jun 21, 2015, at 1:41 PM, Edward Morris wrote:
> >
> >> Thanks Stephanie!
> >>
> >> More input welcome...
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >>
> >> Ed
> >>
> >> Sent from my iPhone
> >>
> >>> On Jun 21, 2015, at 4:58 PM, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca <mailto:stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca>> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> I have made a few editorial revisions...I am taking on board the idea that this should be a strong condemnation of staff free-wheeling, but it is pretty direct.   I like it though, and thanks for whipping it up so quickly...one more thing, the title should have something in there about what it is, too vague right now....
> >>> attached in markup
> >>> Steph
> >>>> On 2015-06-21 16:45, Edward Morris wrote:
> >>>> HI all,
> >>>>
> >>>> Attached find a rather rushed public comment proposed for NCSG to submit on .travel. Please take a look, correct, make better etc. If we're going to get something in we need to approve it at tonight's meeting and submit before 8 p.m. Argentina time tonight.
> >>>>
> >>>> Thanks,
> >>>>
> >>>> Ed
> >>>
> >>> <draft .travel pcsp.docx>
> >>
> >
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