[PC-NCSG] [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to “Enhancing ICANN’s Accountability”-process.
Rafik Dammak
rafik.dammak
Fri Jun 6 11:14:15 EEST 2014
Hi Gabrielle,
thank you very much for the work done and responding to the comments
Rafik
2014-06-06 5:08 GMT+09:00 Gabrielle Guillemin <gabrielle at article19.org>:
> Hi all,
>
> This should be the final document:
>
>
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?usp=sharing
>
> Please note that in most instances, we didn't make any further changes as
> there were no concrete language suggestions or the comments concerned the
> questions themselves.
>
> Changes have been made at: Q1, para. 2, last sentence and Q2, para.2, 2nd
> sentence.
>
> Please let me know if you would like the rationale for these or if there
> is anything else we can do.
>
> All the best,
>
> Gabrielle
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
> ________________________________
> From: Maria Farrell [maria.farrell at gmail.com]
> Sent: 03 June 2014 10:38
> To: Rafik Dammak
> Cc: NCSG-Policy; Niels ten Oever; Gabrielle Guillemin
> Subject: Re: [PC-NCSG] [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
> ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
>
> Sorry, guys - I forgot Niels and Gabrielle weren't on the NCSG PC list.
> Thanks, Rafik!
>
> Rafik, with the timeline I proposed, I let the 5th be potentially a day to
> resolve any conflicting comments Niels and Gabrielle receive. So if they
> get things that are hard to reconcile, they may need that 24 hours to write
> them up. But if not, we should be able to submit on 5 June.
>
> cheers, m
>
>
> On 3 June 2014 10:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:
> rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>
> Hi Maria,
>
> Thanks!adding niels and gabrielle in cc.
> With your proposed timeline I can submit by 5th june?
>
> Rafik
>
> On Jun 3, 2014 6:16 PM, "Maria Farrell" <maria.farrell at gmail.com<mailto:
> maria.farrell at gmail.com>> wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Following the 1-week extension by ICANN to submission of comments, we now
> need to finalise and submit ours.
>
> Any final revisions need to be submitted by midnight GMT tomorrow, Weds, 4
> June. The final version will be submitted to ICANN 24 hours after that.
>
> So 1) if you have final revisions, make them to this doc (and note your
> rationale), or send direct to Niels and Gabrielle.
>
> 2) Niels/Gabrielle, please send me the final version by midnight GMT,
> Thurs 5 June.
>
> All the best, Maria
>
>
> On 27 May 2014 13:05, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:
> rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
> Hi Maria,
>
> Niels and Gabrielle are going to work in the comments today to resolve the
> comments. I guess we can have clean version by tomorrow?
> I can confirm with them
>
> Rafik
>
>
> 2014-05-27 20:56 GMT+09:00 Maria Farrell <maria.farrell at gmail.com<mailto:
> maria.farrell at gmail.com>>:
>
> Hi all,
>
> Are Niels and Gabrielle happy with the current draft of the document at
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit
> ?
>
> As Rafik has pointed out, we have another couple of days to finalise. So
> I'd just like to check if the interested people are still working on the
> draft / or satisfied with it?
>
> All the best, Maria
>
>
>
> On 26 May 2014 06:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:
> rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>
> Hi Marilia,
>
> thanks for the review and commenting. the deadline to submit was Tuesday
> 23:59 UTC but checking the announcement, we get 3 additional days because
> the technical issuers with migration to new website (
> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/enhancing-accountability-2014-05-06-en
> ).
>
> Policy Committee should endorse asap. I think that Maria will handle the
> last call as PC chair. then having the green light I will submit before the
> deadline.
>
> there will be reply period after this and I think we can expand with
> another comment about missing parts or clarifying others, in addition to
> commenting the contributions of other groups.
>
> Niels and Gabrielle are working on resolving remaining questions in the
> document.
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Rafik
>
>
> 2014-05-26 8:03 GMT+09:00 Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com<mailto:
> mariliamaciel at gmail.com>>:
>
> Thanks, Rafik. Made a few comments, mostly on top of others.
> Good contribution. Thanks to folks of Article 19 and others who worked on
> it.
> Best,
> Mar?lia
>
>
> On Fri, May 23, 2014 at 2:42 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
> <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
> Hi Avri,
>
> Niels and Gabrielle will answers comments soon. and yes we should lockdown
> on language soon. hope that next comments would propose some wording.
> I think we will be more efficient than ITU.. hopefully :)
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Rafik
>
> 2014-05-23 1:55 GMT+09:00 Avri Doria <avri at acm.org<mailto:avri at acm.org>>:
>
> hi,
>
> had already indicated it in comments. have now added words to Rafik's
> added words.
>
> added some other weasel words too in response to some of Milton's concerns.
>
> when do we get a lock down on the language and a removal of brackets.
>
> [we have become so ITU.]
>
> avri
>
>
> On 22-May-14 10:47, Maria Farrell wrote:
> > Hi guys,
> >
> > No final call has yet been made. Avri, would you mind marking up the
> > text with your suggestions and re-circulating?
> >
> > Many thanks, Maria
> >
> >
> > On 22 May 2014 13:22, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:
> rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
> > <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>>> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Rudi,
> >
> > no, Niels shared the document two days ago and we are getting
> > comments now.
> >
> > Rafik
> >
> >
> > 2014-05-22 17:08 GMT+09:00 Rudi Vansnick <rudi.vansnick at isoc.be
> <mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be>
> > <mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be<mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be>>>:
> >
> > If I?m not wrong we agreed on the content of the proposed
> > document (googledoc) a week ago.
> >
> > Maria, can you proceed ?
> >
> > Kind regards,
> >
> > Rudi Vansnick
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> > Op 20-mei-2014, om 13:06 heeft Rafik Dammak
> > <rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com> <mailto:
> rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>>> het
> > volgende geschreven:
> >
> >> Hi everyone,
> >>
> >> We have this draft commenting ICANN accountability. The
> >> comment deadline is 27th may.
> >> I count on PC to act quickly.
> >>
> >> Best Regards,
> >>
> >> Rafik
> >>
> >> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> >> From: "Niels ten Oever" <lists at digitaldissidents.org<mailto:
> lists at digitaldissidents.org>
> >> <mailto:lists at digitaldissidents.org<mailto:
> lists at digitaldissidents.org>>>
> >> Date: May 20, 2014 7:58 PM
> >> Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
> >> ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
> >> To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu<mailto:
> NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>
> >> <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu<mailto:
> NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>>>
> >> Cc:
> >>
> >> Dear all,
> >>
> >> Gabrielle and I, with the great comments from Brenden and
> >> Avri, have
> >> drafted a potential NCSG response to the ?Enhancing ICANN?s
> >> Accountability?-process. You can find it and comment here:
> >>
> >>
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?usp=sharing
> >>
> >> The deadline is Tuesday next week, so it would be great if you
> >> could
> >> share your comments before Monday the 26th.
> >>
> >> Best,
> >>
> >> Niels
> >>
> >>
> >> Niels ten Oever
> >> Acting Head of Digital
> >>
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