[PC-NCSG] Fwd: [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to “Enhancing ICANN’s Accountability”-process.
Rafik Dammak
rafik.dammak
Fri Jun 6 10:32:38 EEST 2014
FYI
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From: Gabrielle Guillemin <gabrielle at article19.org>
Date: 2014-06-06 5:08 GMT+09:00
Subject: RE: [PC-NCSG] [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
To: Maria Farrell <maria.farrell at gmail.com>, Rafik Dammak <
rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
Cc: NCSG-Policy <pc-ncsg at ipjustice.org>, Niels ten Oever <
niels at article19.org>
Hi all,
This should be the final document:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?usp=sharing
Please note that in most instances, we didn't make any further changes as
there were no concrete language suggestions or the comments concerned the
questions themselves.
Changes have been made at: Q1, para. 2, last sentence and Q2, para.2, 2nd
sentence.
Please let me know if you would like the rationale for these or if there is
anything else we can do.
All the best,
Gabrielle
________________________________
From: Maria Farrell [maria.farrell at gmail.com]
Sent: 03 June 2014 10:38
To: Rafik Dammak
Cc: NCSG-Policy; Niels ten Oever; Gabrielle Guillemin
Subject: Re: [PC-NCSG] [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
Sorry, guys - I forgot Niels and Gabrielle weren't on the NCSG PC list.
Thanks, Rafik!
Rafik, with the timeline I proposed, I let the 5th be potentially a day to
resolve any conflicting comments Niels and Gabrielle receive. So if they
get things that are hard to reconcile, they may need that 24 hours to write
them up. But if not, we should be able to submit on 5 June.
cheers, m
On 3 June 2014 10:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:
rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
Hi Maria,
Thanks!adding niels and gabrielle in cc.
With your proposed timeline I can submit by 5th june?
Rafik
On Jun 3, 2014 6:16 PM, "Maria Farrell" <maria.farrell at gmail.com<mailto:
maria.farrell at gmail.com>> wrote:
Hi all,
Following the 1-week extension by ICANN to submission of comments, we now
need to finalise and submit ours.
Any final revisions need to be submitted by midnight GMT tomorrow, Weds, 4
June. The final version will be submitted to ICANN 24 hours after that.
So 1) if you have final revisions, make them to this doc (and note your
rationale), or send direct to Niels and Gabrielle.
2) Niels/Gabrielle, please send me the final version by midnight GMT, Thurs
5 June.
All the best, Maria
On 27 May 2014 13:05, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:
rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
Hi Maria,
Niels and Gabrielle are going to work in the comments today to resolve the
comments. I guess we can have clean version by tomorrow?
I can confirm with them
Rafik
2014-05-27 20:56 GMT+09:00 Maria Farrell <maria.farrell at gmail.com<mailto:
maria.farrell at gmail.com>>:
Hi all,
Are Niels and Gabrielle happy with the current draft of the document at
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit
?
As Rafik has pointed out, we have another couple of days to finalise. So
I'd just like to check if the interested people are still working on the
draft / or satisfied with it?
All the best, Maria
On 26 May 2014 06:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:
rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
Hi Marilia,
thanks for the review and commenting. the deadline to submit was Tuesday
23:59 UTC but checking the announcement, we get 3 additional days because
the technical issuers with migration to new website (
https://www.icann.org/public-comments/enhancing-accountability-2014-05-06-en
).
Policy Committee should endorse asap. I think that Maria will handle the
last call as PC chair. then having the green light I will submit before the
deadline.
there will be reply period after this and I think we can expand with
another comment about missing parts or clarifying others, in addition to
commenting the contributions of other groups.
Niels and Gabrielle are working on resolving remaining questions in the
document.
Best Regards,
Rafik
2014-05-26 8:03 GMT+09:00 Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com<mailto:
mariliamaciel at gmail.com>>:
Thanks, Rafik. Made a few comments, mostly on top of others.
Good contribution. Thanks to folks of Article 19 and others who worked on
it.
Best,
Mar?lia
On Fri, May 23, 2014 at 2:42 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
<mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
Hi Avri,
Niels and Gabrielle will answers comments soon. and yes we should lockdown
on language soon. hope that next comments would propose some wording.
I think we will be more efficient than ITU.. hopefully :)
Best Regards,
Rafik
2014-05-23 1:55 GMT+09:00 Avri Doria <avri at acm.org<mailto:avri at acm.org>>:
hi,
had already indicated it in comments. have now added words to Rafik's
added words.
added some other weasel words too in response to some of Milton's concerns.
when do we get a lock down on the language and a removal of brackets.
[we have become so ITU.]
avri
On 22-May-14 10:47, Maria Farrell wrote:
> Hi guys,
>
> No final call has yet been made. Avri, would you mind marking up the
> text with your suggestions and re-circulating?
>
> Many thanks, Maria
>
>
> On 22 May 2014 13:22, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:
rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
> <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>>> wrote:
>
> Hi Rudi,
>
> no, Niels shared the document two days ago and we are getting
> comments now.
>
> Rafik
>
>
> 2014-05-22 17:08 GMT+09:00 Rudi Vansnick <rudi.vansnick at isoc.be
<mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be>
> <mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be<mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be>>>:
>
> If I?m not wrong we agreed on the content of the proposed
> document (googledoc) a week ago.
>
> Maria, can you proceed ?
>
> Kind regards,
>
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> Op 20-mei-2014, om 13:06 heeft Rafik Dammak
> <rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com> <mailto:
rafik.dammak at gmail.com<mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>>> het
> volgende geschreven:
>
>> Hi everyone,
>>
>> We have this draft commenting ICANN accountability. The
>> comment deadline is 27th may.
>> I count on PC to act quickly.
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>> Rafik
>>
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>> From: "Niels ten Oever" <lists at digitaldissidents.org<mailto:
lists at digitaldissidents.org>
>> <mailto:lists at digitaldissidents.org<mailto:
lists at digitaldissidents.org>>>
>> Date: May 20, 2014 7:58 PM
>> Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
>> ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
>> To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu<mailto:
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>> <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu<mailto:
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>> Cc:
>>
>> Dear all,
>>
>> Gabrielle and I, with the great comments from Brenden and
>> Avri, have
>> drafted a potential NCSG response to the ?Enhancing ICANN?s
>> Accountability?-process. You can find it and comment here:
>>
>>
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?usp=sharing
>>
>> The deadline is Tuesday next week, so it would be great if you
>> could
>> share your comments before Monday the 26th.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Niels
>>
>>
>> Niels ten Oever
>> Acting Head of Digital
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