[NCSG-PC] [Public Comment] Call for volunteers - Pilot Holistic Review Draft Terms of Reference

[Tomslin Samme-Nlar]

Hi Caleb and Stephanie,

I assume you weren't able to put the draft together, since today is the
last day of the extended deadline to submit a comment?

Warmly,
Tomslin
@LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/


On Sun, 30 Oct 2022 at 07:40, Tomslin Samme-Nlar <mesumbeslin at gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi Caleb and Stephanie,
>
> I hope you both are well and thanks again for volunteering to draft this
> comment. I suppose you know the deadline was extended to 10 November 2022.
> Knowing that is only 10 days away, I was wondering if we have something we
> can share with the community for review yet?
>
> Warmly,
> Tomslin
> @LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/
>
>
> On Thu, 22 Sept 2022 at 19:39, Tomslin Samme-Nlar <mesumbeslin at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> The public comment period on the Pilot Holistic Review Draft Terms of
>> Reference is open. The Third Accountability and Transparency Review Team
>> (ATRT3) recommended that a Holistic Review be initiated by ICANN Org. The
>> review will have implications for various community structures and groups,
>> including potential implications on how the various SO/AC structures are
>> organized and evaluated in the future.
>>
>> Considering the potential implications on the ICANN structures and work,
>> the Board is seeking input on whether the Draft Terms of Reference seems
>> fit for purpose, and whether it is tailored to the community’s expectations
>> based upon ATRT3 recommendation 3.5, including scheduling and timing in
>> light of other community and stakeholder work.
>>
>> The Policy Committee is now calling for volunteers to draft an NCSG
>> comment/response for this proceeding which is due for consideration on
>> Thursday 03 October 2022 to allow time for filling and submitting the new
>> public comment form.
>>
>> Please let me know off-list if you'd like to volunteer for the comment
>> drafting. It'll be nice to have more than one volunteer, including
>> new-commers who can use this as an opportunity to learn and be familiar
>> with policy work.
>>
>> More information about the policy status report can be found here :
>> https://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/proceeding/pilot-holistic-review-draft-terms-of-reference-30-08-2022
>>
>> A draft Google doc for the comment in the guided format can be found
>> here:
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DtxcgIneTH8pwpfvV4sTAoGBi9h6I-EVKos7ZU8Xb7g/edit?usp=sharing
>>
>> You can find previous NCSG comments here:
>> https://community.icann.org/display/gnsononcomstake/Public+Comments+-+2022
>>
>> See below some best practices for the penholder:
>>
>>         Provide the first draft on the mailing list in by day 21 of the
>> comment period
>>         Try to resolve the comments throughout the duration of comment
>> period
>>         Make sure that the commenter has seen how comment has been
>> resolved (contact them directly if necessary)
>>
>> Warmly,
>> Tomslin
>> @LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/
>>
>
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