[NCSG-PC] [urgent for review] Proposed Comment on the Geographic Names at the Top Level - Supplemental Initial Report

[Farell FOLLY]

That is a very good comment. Apart from some minor typos, I have no additional input. I thank the drafters, they did a very good job.

However; the format is rather different from recent comments we wrote, and for coherence I suggest that in the future we always try to stick to a similar template (paragraphs, numbering style, etc.), otherwise our targets/intended recipients could get confused about our style (i.e to easily identify where we analyse, where we conclude and where we opine, etc.) when they receive two or more consecutive feedbacks from us. Nevertheless, the document is good and well written.

@Rafik, I recall that a DIFFERENT feedback submission format has been recently used for EPDP, and here; we had also agreed on a kind of template (style, paragraphs, information, fields) to include in our NCSG comments, consequently; do you think that we can merge both and suggest that to ICANN as PC submission template? Or simply adapt it for our own use (and of course, formalize it through our operations procedures)

@__f_f__

Best Regards
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(Ekue) Farell FOLLY
NCUC Rep. to the NCSG Policy Committee
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> On 31 Jan 2019, at 06:52, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at GMAIL.COM> wrote:
> 
> Thanks Tatiana and Ayden, looking for other PC members to review.
> 
> Rafik
> 
> Le jeu. 31 janv. 2019 à 08:26, Tatiana Tropina <tatiana.tropina at gmail.com <mailto:tatiana.tropina at gmail.com>> a écrit :
> My support for submission and my thanks to Bruna and everyone who drafted it, too. 
> Cheers,
> Tanya 
> 
> On Thu, 31 Jan 2019 at 00:17, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com <mailto:icann at ferdeline.com>> wrote:
> I support the submission of this comment; thanks to Bruna et al for drafting it!
> 
> Ayden  
> 
> 
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On Tuesday, January 29, 2019 6:48 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
> 
>> Hi all,
>> 
>> we have this draft comment to review quickly , regarding WT5 initial report.
>> it is a critical track in subpro WG.
>> 
>> Best,
>> 
>> Rafik
>> 
>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
>> From: Bruna Martins dos Santos <bruna.mrtns at gmail.com <mailto:bruna.mrtns at gmail.com>>
>> Date: mar. 29 janv. 2019 à 20:35
>> Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Proposed Comment on the Geographic Names at the Top Level - Supplemental Initial Report
>> To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>>
>> 
>> 
>> Dear all, 
>> 
>> I would like to share with you the proposed comment to the Work Track 5 on Geographic Names at the Top Level - Supplemental Initial Report of the New gTLD Subsequent Procedures Policy Development Process. Submissions are due in just over three days time (feb 1st as a deadline), so I’m sharing this on our mailing list today for your speedy review and suggested edits. 
>> 
>> The proposed comment can be found here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EyQ_D37jbIpKByOyknOVwrBO0-GLKVdyFI_64_s2l9U/edit <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EyQ_D37jbIpKByOyknOVwrBO0-GLKVdyFI_64_s2l9U/edit>
>> 
>> Ps. Thanks to Farzaneh and all the others who volunteered to work on this comment. 
>> 
>> Best, 
>> -- 
>> Bruna Martins dos Santos 
>> 
>> Skype ID: bruna.martinsantos
>> @boomartins
> 
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