[NCSG-PC] Reminder RDAP Comment review

[Rafik Dammak]

hi all,

attached the latest version to be submitted if there is no strong objection
in coming hours.
Thank you.

Best Regards,

Rafik

Le dim. 14 oct. 2018 à 19:31, Tatiana Tropina <tatiana.tropina at gmail.com> a
écrit :

> Thanks Ayden for going through it and corrections. :-)
> Have a great Sunday, all!
>
> On Sun, 14 Oct 2018 at 12:30, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:
>
>> Thanks Tanya, Rafik-
>>
>> I also support the submission now of this comment.
>>
>> Best wishes, Ayden
>>
>> On 14 Oct 2018, at 12:17, Tatiana Tropina <tatiana.tropina at gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>> All,
>> I added some corrections. A couple of sentences need to be rephrased as
>> they are not clear, but I see that Ayden is giving it a go so am sure he
>> will fix the things language-wise. I am fine for now, if I don't have time
>> to go after Ayden, I support the submission anyway.
>> Cheers,
>> Tanya
>>
>> On Sun, 14 Oct 2018 at 12:01, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi all,
>>>
>>> please review RDAP draft comment. we have to submit asap.
>>>
>>> Best Regards,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>>
>>> Le dim. 14 oct. 2018 à 00:29, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> a
>>> écrit :
>>>
>>>> Hi all,
>>>>
>>>> I understand that Farzaneh is doing some changes in the draft and
>>>> hearing also that James wants to add (the link is here
>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4VtzmTe9qTSC8h8RPuT4HMb0c83odIN75wBdDA2VVg/edit).
>>>> having the deadline during the weekend help us to continue the finalization
>>>> and review of the draft.
>>>> when we have a new version, I will ask all PC members to review the
>>>> comment.
>>>> Thanks.
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Rafik
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Le sam. 13 oct. 2018 à 18:24, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> a
>>>> écrit :
>>>>
>>>>> Hi all,
>>>>>
>>>>> this a reminder regarding the RDAP comment. the deadline for
>>>>> submission is this weekend. Farzaneh already added her substantive comments
>>>>> and Farell did a review already.
>>>>>
>>>>> Best,
>>>>>
>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>
>>>>> Le mar. 9 oct. 2018 à 20:20, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> a
>>>>> écrit :
>>>>>
>>>>>> Hi,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> putting this for NCSG PC review soon *https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4VtzmTe9qTSC8h8RPuT4HMb0c83odIN75wBdDA2VVg/edit
>>>>>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4VtzmTe9qTSC8h8RPuT4HMb0c83odIN75wBdDA2VVg/edit>* .
>>>>>> I know that Farzaneh will add more to the comment. I also heard from
>>>>>> another person planning to add edits too.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Best,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
>>>>>> From: Tomslin Samme-Nlar <mesumbeslin at gmail.com>
>>>>>> Date: lun. 24 sept. 2018 à 12:38
>>>>>> Subject: [Public Comments] Draft Comment on Proposed
>>>>>> gTLD-Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) Profile
>>>>>> To: ncsg-discuss <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>
>>>>>> Cc: Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Dear all,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> As you know, the public comment period for the proposed
>>>>>> gTLD-Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) Profile  is currently open.
>>>>>> It closes on 13 October 2018. On behalf of the comment drafting team,
>>>>>> please find the link to the NCSG draft we have prepared for your review,
>>>>>> edit and comment.
>>>>>> *https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4VtzmTe9qTSC8h8RPuT4HMb0c83odIN75wBdDA2VVg/edit
>>>>>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4VtzmTe9qTSC8h8RPuT4HMb0c83odIN75wBdDA2VVg/edit>*
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>>> ----
>>>>>> Tomslin
>>>>>>
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