[NCSG-PC] Comment review

[Ayden Férdeline]

Hi,

I have added some suggested edits to the document now.

Thanks to all those who drafted it.

I believe the submission deadline is in less than 12 hours time.

Ayden

> On 13 Oct 2018, at 11:24, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hi all,
>
> this a reminder regarding the RDAP comment. the deadline for submission is this weekend. Farzaneh already added her substantive comments and Farell did a review already.
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
> Le mar. 9 oct. 2018 à 20:20, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> a écrit :
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> putting this for NCSG PC review soon https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4VtzmTe9qTSC8h8RPuT4HMb0c83odIN75wBdDA2VVg/edit . I know that Farzaneh will add more to the comment. I also heard from another person planning to add edits too.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Rafik
>>
>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
>> From: Tomslin Samme-Nlar <mesumbeslin at gmail.com>
>> Date: lun. 24 sept. 2018 à 12:38
>> Subject: [Public Comments] Draft Comment on Proposed gTLD-Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) Profile
>> To: ncsg-discuss <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>
>> Cc: Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>>
>> Dear all,
>>
>> As you know, the public comment period for the proposed gTLD-Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) Profile  is currently open. It closes on 13 October 2018. On behalf of the comment drafting team, please find the link to the NCSG draft we have prepared for your review, edit and comment.
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4VtzmTe9qTSC8h8RPuT4HMb0c83odIN75wBdDA2VVg/edit
>>
>> Cheers,
>> ----
>> Tomslin
>>
>>>
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