[NCSG-PC] public comment reviews (submission by 27th Nov)

[Arsène Tungali]

Hi,

I have reviewed the comment on the CCWG AP and have made few comments
and suggested edits (mostly on the reporting section, as a non profit
executive). I am sorry for doing this only now. Disclaimer: I did not
read the supporting documents due to time constraints, only read our
comment.

I will check the CCT comment but don't expect to have comment since i
don't follow that part closely.

Thanks to those who worked on these comments.

2018-11-26 16:09 UTC+02:00, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>:
> Hi all,
>
> another reminder about reviewing and finalizing the comments.
> I will follow-up tomorrow my time to respond to comments and edits.
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
> Le dim. 25 nov. 2018 à 09:18, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> a
> écrit :
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> this is a reminder for reviewing the comments.
>> I cleaned-up the documents accepting most of the edits.  I also added
>> some
>> comments/questions there for clarification.
>> I agree they are in good shape. so please review asap.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Rafik
>> Le jeu. 22 nov. 2018 à 08:02, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> a
>> écrit :
>>
>>> hi all,
>>>
>>> we have 2 draft comments to review for submission on 27th November:
>>>
>>> - The initial report on Auctions Proceeds:
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XL_KZuzd9TD8w74mndklzpHLV37MYrJdGPbW5Ucn0ao/edit
>>> - CCT RT final report:
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iRMb8X9mN-8cInJuVyHargHIPM9E1Ibq5LRsYcKUuJg/edit
>>>
>>> please review, add your comments and edits.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>
>


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