[NCSG-PC] next version of comment on March 8 GDPR model

[Stephanie Perrin]

Thanks Arsene.

SP

On 2018-03-11 17:38, Arsène Tungali wrote:
> Just for the record here and as I said during the meeting.
>
> Since this is a matter of urgency and this letter was quickly drafted 
> (thanks Stephanie) and we have to submit it within 24 hours, i have no 
> objection. I haven't had a chance to go through the whole document but 
> i think the conclusion is okay. Trusting our subject matter experts on 
> this, I support its submission.
>
> Regards,
> Arsene
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> 2018-03-11 14:45 GMT-04:00 Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com 
> <mailto:icann at ferdeline.com>>:
>
>     This is excellent; I support its submission with three very minor
>     edits:
>
>     1) Page 4 - remove the period between "public.interest"
>     2) Page 4 - bullet 2 - change 'or' to 'nor'
>     3) Remove ellipsis in the 'Anonymous Email Mechanisms' subheading
>
>     Thanks again for drafting it, Stephanie!
>
>     Ayden
>
>
>     ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>     On 11 March 2018 6:30 PM, Stephanie Perrin
>     <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca
>     <mailto:stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca>> wrote:
>
>>     Ok I have tried to address all concerns, please check this new
>>     draft and let me know ....I left it in markup for your convenience.
>>
>>     Best
>>
>>     Steph
>>
>
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