[NCSG-PC] next version of comment on March 8 GDPR model

Ayden Férdeline icann at ferdeline.com
Sun Mar 11 20:45:34 EET 2018


This is excellent; I support its submission with three very minor edits:

1) Page 4 - remove the period between "public.interest"
2) Page 4 - bullet 2 - change 'or' to 'nor'
3) Remove ellipsis in the 'Anonymous Email Mechanisms' subheading

Thanks again for drafting it, Stephanie!

Ayden

‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
On 11 March 2018 6:30 PM, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca> wrote:

> Ok I have tried to address all concerns, please check this new draft and let me know ....I left it in markup for your convenience.
>
> Best
>
> Steph
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