[NCSG-PC] latest letter, the response to the March 8 GDPR compliance model

[farzaneh badii]

I have made minor changes to this.

We don't represent end users. so I corrected that.

I don't think we support GAC to come up with the list of law enforcement
agencies who can have access to data. so I changed that to GAC can ....

What we need to push for is really to say: tiered access can't happen now,
adopt model 3 move the tiered access after adoption if you can't then a
group of community members can work with GAC for coming up with layered
access.

A five pager document submitted now would be read by no one, would be
difficult to advocate for. We have to highlight our points on the first
page, be short and sweet and provide our analysis on the rest of the pages
(maybe move the points you are making to the first and second page.

This is advice only. Take it or leave it. I am not the subject matter
expert.








Farzaneh

On Sun, Mar 11, 2018 at 3:45 AM, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com>
wrote:

> I support its submission.
>
> Ayden
>
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> On Sat, Mar 10, 2018 at 23:43, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> Hi all,
>
> please review the letter, as we discussed during the NCSG inreach session
> today and due to the urgency we have to send the letter within 24hours. so
> we have to get it done by tomorrow.
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
>
>
> 2018-03-10 18:01 GMT-04:00 Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin at mail.
> utoronto.ca>:
>
>> Ok folks, here is the letter as currently drafted.   COmments welcome.
>> Thanks to Ayden for many useful comments
>>
>> Stephanie
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