[NCSG-PC] First draft - Community Travel Support Guidelines

[Dr. Tatiana Tropina]

Thanks Rafik and Ayden,

I will go through the document in the next 23 hours (that's what left
from suggested 24h) :-) I might propose some edits, I see that the
document is, indeed, different from what is used to be a week ago, but
may be some surgery is still required (not a major one, but I would love
to soften the language a wee bit bit in parts - Ayden hope you forgive
me! :))

Okay, the clocks start ticking for me - 23 hours.

Cheers,

Tanya


On 18/06/18 16:04, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
> Thanks, Rafik; please note that I have reviewed and edited the Google
> Doc in order to resolve many of the comments that had been left
> already. So it might not be the same version that you reviewed a week
> or two ago. So please take a look when you can; I would like to get
> this out to NCSG members for their input sooner rather than later.
>
> Best wishes, Ayden  
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On 18 June 2018 4:01 PM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi Ayden,
>>
>> I would like to defer sharing this for 24 hours, I think there were
>> several edits and we can review again. after that 24 horus passed, we
>> can share the draft to NCSF list.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Rafik
>>
>> Le lun. 18 juin 2018 à 22:56, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com
>> <mailto:icann at ferdeline.com>> a écrit :
>>
>>     Hi
>>
>>     Are there any objections to sharing this on the NCSG-Discuss
>>     list? I presume not as it is just a draft, and not final, but if
>>     we share it today we can give members four weeks to look over it
>>     and potentially comment, before the PC needs to review the final
>>     version.
>>
>>     Thanks, Ayden  
>>
>>
>>     ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>>     On 12 June 2018 2:55 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
>>     <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>
>>>     Hi Ayden,
>>>
>>>     Thanks  again for the draft.
>>>     as there are several comments and edits, I think it should be
>>>     tidy-up first before as second round of review or comments.
>>>     after that, we can share it in NCSG list.
>>>
>>>     Best,
>>>
>>>     Rafik
>>>
>>>     Le mar. 12 juin 2018 à 02:33, Ayden Férdeline
>>>     <icann at ferdeline.com <mailto:icann at ferdeline.com>> a écrit :
>>>
>>>         I have made further edits to the draft comment now.
>>>         Unfortunately I did not realise until half-way through that
>>>         I was not in 'suggestion' mode, but all my substantive,
>>>         non-grammatical edits are in suggestion mode. The comment is
>>>         in good shape now, I think. Unless there are any concerns I
>>>         think we could share this with the NCSG list?
>>>
>>>         -Ayden 
>>>
>>>
>>>         ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>>>         On 10 June 2018 3:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline
>>>         <icann at ferdeline.com <mailto:icann at ferdeline.com>> wrote:
>>>
>>>>         Thanks Kathy, great edits!
>>>>
>>>>         Ayden  
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>         ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>>>>         On 10 June 2018 3:23 PM, Kathy Kleiman
>>>>         <kathy at kathykleiman.com <mailto:kathy at kathykleiman.com>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>>         My edits now added. Kudos to all leading this for working
>>>>>         so far ahead!
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>         On 6/9/2018 6:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
>>>>>>         I've added some text to our comment on the
>>>>>>         proposed Community Travel Support Guidelines:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>         https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing
>>>>>>
>>>>>>         The deadline for submission of this comment is still six
>>>>>>         weeks away, but please can you review this rough draft
>>>>>>         and add your comments/edits so that we can share this
>>>>>>         with members soon (this week ideally).
>>>>>>
>>>>>>         Best wishes, Ayden
>>>>>>
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