[NCSG-PC] First draft - Community Travel Support Guidelines

[Rafik Dammak]

Hi Ayden,

I would like to defer sharing this for 24 hours, I think there were several
edits and we can review again. after that 24 horus passed, we can share the
draft to NCSF list.

Best,

Rafik

Le lun. 18 juin 2018 à 22:56, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a
écrit :

> Hi
>
> Are there any objections to sharing this on the NCSG-Discuss list? I
> presume not as it is just a draft, and not final, but if we share it today
> we can give members four weeks to look over it and potentially comment,
> before the PC needs to review the final version.
>
> Thanks, Ayden
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On 12 June 2018 2:55 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Ayden,
>
> Thanks  again for the draft.
> as there are several comments and edits, I think it should be tidy-up
> first before as second round of review or comments.
> after that, we can share it in NCSG list.
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
> Le mar. 12 juin 2018 à 02:33, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a
> écrit :
>
>> I have made further edits to the draft comment now. Unfortunately I did
>> not realise until half-way through that I was not in 'suggestion' mode, but
>> all my substantive, non-grammatical edits are in suggestion mode. The
>> comment is in good shape now, I think. Unless there are any concerns I
>> think we could share this with the NCSG list?
>>
>> -Ayden
>>
>>
>> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>> On 10 June 2018 3:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:
>>
>> Thanks Kathy, great edits!
>>
>> Ayden
>>
>>
>> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>> On 10 June 2018 3:23 PM, Kathy Kleiman <kathy at kathykleiman.com> wrote:
>>
>> My edits now added. Kudos to all leading this for working so far ahead!
>>
>> On 6/9/2018 6:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
>>
>> I've added some text to our comment on the proposed Community Travel
>> Support Guidelines:
>>
>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing
>>
>> The deadline for submission of this comment is still six weeks away, but
>> please can you review this rough draft and add your comments/edits so that
>> we can share this with members soon (this week ideally).
>>
>> Best wishes, Ayden
>>
>>
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