[NCSG-PC] Fwd: EDPD Leadership Comments Table

Ayden Férdeline icann at ferdeline.com
Fri Jul 6 13:58:26 EEST 2018 

I'm going through the document now and painfully re-inserting them, this time how they want - as individual comments rather than as 'suggestion' mode edits. How this makes things easier for anyone I do not know. I'll be inserting around 500 comment boxes, for every comma I want inserted, every typo corrected, every word I'd like changed... but I think this is important, there's language in here around polls and when polls can be used that we need changed.

Ayden

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On 6 July 2018 7:58 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Ayden,
>
> I don't know which edits not reinstated but when checking the google doc (EDPD Leadership Comments Table based on what you forwared) right now I can see edits you made. unless you mean another document?
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
> Le ven. 6 juil. 2018 à 14:41, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a écrit :
>
>> No, I think they were not reinstated.
>>
>> It really defeats the point of using Google Doc if we cannot change the text ourselves and need to instead discuss changes in the "comments / suggestions section."
>>
>> Even typos were rejected; ie "fact" could not be replaced with "face." I guess I will first have to justify correcting this obvious typo.
>>
>> I don’t see how this is easier for anyone. I haven’t reviewed all of the documents to see if others edits were rejected, too — but I do think we should be marking up the text instead, as it is this easier for everyone to know what proposal is on the table.
>>
>> Ayden
>>
>> Sent from ProtonMail Mobile
>>
>> On Fri, Jul 6, 2018 at 03:54, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> I think the edits were reinstated. Marika sent communication a few hours ago:
>>>
>>> "As a reminder, please do not redline the current text in the charter which appears in the first section of the document, but instead, please provide your comments / proposed edits as part of the comments / suggestions section."
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>> Le ven. 6 juil. 2018 à 09:19, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a écrit :
>>>
>>>> All of my edits were rejected. Good luck to everyone else who spends their afternoon reviewing the 8 different Google Docs. I hope some of you edits are accepted...
>>>>
>>>> Ayden
>>>>
>>>> Sent from ProtonMail Mobile
>>>>
>>>>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>>>>>
>>>>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
>>>>> From: Marika Konings (Google Docs) <[d+MTEwMTI0MDYyNTI4MDYxMzUzOTA3-MTEyMDY2MDg3OTg4NTE1NjM0MDc2 at docs.google.com](mailto:d%2BMTEwMTI0MDYyNTI4MDYxMzUzOTA3-MTEyMDY2MDg3OTg4NTE1NjM0MDc2 at docs.google.com)>
>>>>> Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2018 at 00:02
>>>>> Subject: EDPD Leadership Comments Table
>>>>> To: <hostime at gmail.com>
>>>>>
>>>>> Marika Konings resolved suggestions in [EDPD Leadership Comments Table](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkM&ts=5b3e955f&usp=comment_email_document)
>>>>>
>>>>> Resolved
>>>>>
>>>>> 24 rejected suggestions
>>>>>
>>>>> Resolved
>>>>>
>>>>> Suggestions
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Add: "as and"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
>>>>>
>>>>> Rejected suggestion
>>>>>
>>>>> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdXYXig_LvoskS-eBAVneoHTeLxPvHJPSP55DaxF37Na774RnMwVSeXxoKr_LRYzOthC-cphLDgiyPpwKbsMg0DcFykP62JGgTt5OIuuumY3uveUu4 at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkM&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Replace: "versus. participating as an EPDP Team member" with ", and not to make personal interventions"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
>>>>>
>>>>> Rejected suggestion
>>>>>
>>>>> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpReN0nGb6rPmqGoJmhr6A019xuRbQsZP5tmJVHqGSg-A4HoCnipfPwwxbB6dTadkPzCT5fpEkRXNkqROvLV34906wyM0Yz9GCVECpn8myqTS3suoeqg at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkI&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Replace: "her" with "the EPDP in their official"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
>>>>>
>>>>> Rejected suggestion
>>>>>
>>>>> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcocxvV6fJMlU34sYNiXR3tjhbkV547x6mgPvUQxBFhV8gwOQJFMlMTgpR0mz2CmPvvc064Yo6GsIrjrQN1BRimwbS64VGe-Z4Ao_jO-QSQ3Wv88VM at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkE&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Replace: "Will make clear when he/she is acting" with "Only participate"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
>>>>>
>>>>> Rejected suggestion
>>>>>
>>>>> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcz8Ho21DqHezbWyCk22b7jPW_xdmcw3oXWUrttIIV_supO65J3lmc8qCGsdIhOBbrTosqpTaAATPciNG_qeLdQFw45pOqDduslo9UW0qMkLQ7jgPQ at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkA&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Replace: "in" with "on calls in their official"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
>>>>>
>>>>> Rejected suggestion
>>>>>
>>>>> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdDiYY7WbBShhMG6P6-xMh8dbtEpOnaja2fW94P2po3XzWFwy3cuBoGRLGmjC70CxTVwD8FPRmz7ztXijhc1gJftgMpFvflLUotugR9HBLjvfnnfsY at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sj4&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Delete: "ing"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
>>>>>
>>>>> Rejected suggestion
>>>>>
>>>>> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRfTznDurVJ-EdwUPgYXbhKOTfRMwc3xWh-RxfjbNCl8xkdgW92dgO_WKPrFRS_dmAD8tKP_hPiv2OIsMRniQOiuQ5raWHZwz-jQ3AwWE1mvwUF2BVw at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sj0&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Replace: "make it explicitly clear when he/she is" with "channel such comments through the representatives of his or her Stakeholder Group, and to only"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
>>>>>
>>>>> Rejected suggestion
>>>>>
>>>>> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRd219ABodPg_BH4cT5ZM2sny8sshk3d4KPI8np1ZjTeLhXLrz5quwjVscl7tQsnS1KcWHUGPY1_eCR1fsNTg_oNxYJ58bcNYhsY1JJZnkeRzAbfu78 at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjw&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Replace: "," with ";"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
>>>>>
>>>>> Rejected suggestion
>>>>>
>>>>> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcFN2ClhUO6T4rIqp8NORym59WLlF6OLCrcDDC4scoykyFK9c1lhuU6begRodUzBU_k-T7zuA76E9f_yuJcMbIUf4YBHOsC7bJWl8EYTEcigpzuvGA at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjs&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Replace: "/" with "or"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
>>>>>
>>>>> Rejected suggestion
>>>>>
>>>>> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRd2opzZZhJbu-Vmq58AFc5kSzZglNGMdlpd-EfUNYnTGJG1tCBLgngQ4ig43ifIQEqvy13olOc7vHAlVCzEAKpxus7VMi9SF61V17LQOnDMX4YJ5Z8 at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjo&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Replace: "/" with "or"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]	Marika Konings
>>>>>
>>>>> Rejected suggestion
>>>>>
>>>>> [Reply](mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdbfZv_oRb_o0GRnR2pdKREeAgGA_RueKlBjx9GlaSIuZ8fumyGRpsUam42uyrzDNWkvwF7VwcqJt1ve7ScFca_9JdGFYI6Dus80AkjP_2yD14OfUA at docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table)[Open](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjk&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f)
>>>>>
>>>>> [Ayden Férdeline]	Ayden Férdeline
>>>>>
>>>>> Delete: "wish"
>>>>>
>>>>> [Marika Konings]
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