<div>I'm going through the document now and painfully re-inserting them, this time how they want - as individual comments rather than as 'suggestion' mode edits. How this makes things easier for anyone I do not know. I'll be inserting around 500 comment boxes, for every comma I want inserted, every typo corrected, every word I'd like changed... but I think this is important, there's language in here around polls and when polls can be used that we need changed.<br></div><div><br></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block"><div class="protonmail_signature_block-user"><div>Ayden  <br></div></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block-proton protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div>‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br></div><div> On 6 July 2018 7:58 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak@gmail.com> wrote:<br></div><div> <br></div><blockquote class="protonmail_quote" type="cite"><div dir="ltr"><div>Hi Ayden,<br></div><div><br></div><div>I don't know which edits not reinstated but when checking the google doc (EDPD Leadership Comments Table based on what you forwared) right now I can see edits you made. unless you mean another document?<br></div><div><br></div><div>Best,<br></div><div><br></div><div><div>Rafik<br></div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">Le ven. 6 juil. 2018 à 14:41, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> a écrit :<br></div><blockquote style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex" class="gmail_quote"><div>No, I think they were not reinstated. <br></div><div><br></div><div>It really defeats the point of using Google Doc if we cannot change the text ourselves and need to instead discuss changes in the "comments / suggestions section." <br></div><div><br></div><div>Even typos were rejected; ie "fact" could not be replaced with "face." I guess I will first have to justify correcting this obvious typo. <br></div><div><br></div><div>I don’t see how this is easier for anyone. I haven’t reviewed all of the documents to see if others edits were rejected, too — but I do think we should be marking up the text instead, as it is this easier for everyone to know what proposal is
    on the table. <br></div><div><br></div><div>Ayden<br></div><div><br></div><div id="m_5603653490225407716protonmail_mobile_signature_block">Sent from ProtonMail Mobile<br></div><div><div><br></div><div><div><br></div><div>On Fri, Jul 6, 2018 at 03:54, Rafik Dammak <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div></div><blockquote type="cite" class="m_5603653490225407716protonmail_quote"><div dir="ltr"><div>Hi, <br></div><div><br></div><div>I think the edits were reinstated. Marika sent communication a few hours ago:<br></div><div><br></div><div><div>"<span class="highlight" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255)"><span class="size" style="font-size:14.6667px">As a reminder, please do not redline the current text in the charter which appears in the first section of the document, but instead, please provide your comments / proposed edits as part of the comments / suggestions section.</span></span>" <br></div><div> <br></div><div><div><br></div><div>Best,<br></div></div><div><br></div><div>Rafik<br></div><div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">Le ven. 6 juil. 2018 à 09:19, Ayden Férdeline <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> a écrit : <br></div><blockquote style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204)" class="gmail_quote"><div>All of my edits were rejected. Good luck to everyone else who spends their afternoon reviewing the 8 different Google Docs. I hope some of you edits are accepted...<br></div><div><br></div><div>Ayden <br></div><div><br></div><div id="m_5603653490225407716m_-2984846770943304108protonmail_mobile_signature_block">Sent from ProtonMail Mobile<br></div><blockquote type="cite" class="m_5603653490225407716m_-2984846770943304108protonmail_quote"><div>---------- Forwarded message ---------- <br></div><div> <br></div><div> <br></div><div><br></div><div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr"><div>---------- Forwarded message --------- <br></div><div>From: Marika Konings (Google Docs) <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:d%2BMTEwMTI0MDYyNTI4MDYxMzUzOTA3-MTEyMDY2MDg3OTg4NTE1NjM0MDc2@docs.google.com">d+MTEwMTI0MDYyNTI4MDYxMzUzOTA3-MTEyMDY2MDg3OTg4NTE1NjM0MDc2@docs.google.com</a>> <br></div><div>Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2018 at 00:02 <br></div><div>Subject: EDPD Leadership Comments Table <br></div><div>To: <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:hostime@gmail.com">hostime@gmail.com</a>> <br></div></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div style="font:13px Roboto,Arial"><div><div style="width:100%;padding:24px 0 16px 0;background-color:#f5f5f5;text-align:center"><div style="display:inline-block;width:90%;max-width:680px;min-width:280px;text-align:left;font-family:Roboto,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif"><div dir="ltr" style="height:0px"><br></div><div style="display:block;padding:0 2px"><div style="display:block;background:#fff;height:2px"><br></div></div><div style="border-left:1px solid #f0f0f0;border-right:1px solid #f0f0f0"><div dir="ltr" style="padding:24px 32px 24px 32px;background:#fff;border-right:1px solid #eaeaea;border-left:1px solid #eaeaea"><h2 style="font-size:14px;font-weight:normal;display:inline;margin:0px;line-height:18px;color:#222">Marika Konings resolved suggestions in <span class="notranslate"><a target="_blank" style="color:#36c;text-decoration:none" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkM&ts=5b3e955f&usp=comment_email_document">EDPD Leadership Comments Table</a></span><br></h2><div style="height:16px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div><div style="height:24px"><br></div><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td><b>Resolved</b><br></td></tr><tr><td colspan="0" style="height:6px" height="6"><br></td></tr><tr><td><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px">24 rejected suggestions</span></span><br></td></tr></tbody></table></td></tr></tbody></table></div></div><table style="width:100%;border-collapse:collapse"><tbody><tr><td style="padding:0px"><table style="border-collapse:collapse;width:3px"><tbody><tr height="1"><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#f0f0f0" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#eaeaea" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#e5e5e5" width="1"><br></td></tr><tr height="1"><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#f0f0f0" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#eaeaea" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#eaeaea" width="1"><br></td></tr><tr height="1"><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#f5f5f5" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#f0f0f0" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#f0f0f0" width="1"><br></td></tr></tbody></table></td><td style="width:100%;padding:0px"><div style="height:1px;width:auto;border-top:1px solid #ddd;background:#eaeaea;border-bottom:1px solid #f0f0f0"><br></div></td><td style="padding:0px"><table style="border-collapse:collapse;width:3px"><tbody><tr height="1"><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#e5e5e5" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#eaeaea" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#f0f0f0" width="1"><br></td></tr><tr height="1"><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#eaeaea" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#eaeaea" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#f0f0f0" width="1"><br></td></tr><tr height="1"><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#f0f0f0" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#f0f0f0" width="1"><br></td><td style="padding:0px" bgcolor="#f5f5f5" width="1"><br></td></tr></tbody></table></td></tr></tbody></table><div dir="ltr" style="height:50px"><h1 style="color:#777;font-size:13px;margin:0px;padding:16px 2px 16px 2px;font-weight:normal">Resolved<br></h1></div><div style="display:block;padding:0 2px"><div style="display:block;background:#fff;height:2px"><br></div></div><div style="border-left:1px solid #f0f0f0;border-right:1px solid #f0f0f0"><div dir="ltr" style="padding:24px 32px 24px 32px;background:#fff;border-right:1px solid #eaeaea;border-left:1px solid #eaeaea"><div><h2 style="font-size:14px;font-weight:normal;display:inline;margin:0px;line-height:18px;color:#222">Suggestions<br></h2><div style="height:16px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Add:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"as and"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Marika Konings</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span></span> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><table style="padding-left:calc(48px + 15px)"><tbody><tr><td><a target="_blank" href="mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdXYXig_LvoskS-eBAVneoHTeLxPvHJPSP55DaxF37Na774RnMwVSeXxoKr_LRYzOthC-cphLDgiyPpwKbsMg0DcFykP62JGgTt5OIuuumY3uveUu4@docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Reply</a><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkM&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Open</a><br></td></tr></tbody></table><div style="height:24px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Replace:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"versus. participating as an EPDP Team member"</i></span> with <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>", and not to make personal interventions"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Marika Konings</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span></span> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><table style="padding-left:calc(48px + 15px)"><tbody><tr><td><a target="_blank" href="mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpReN0nGb6rPmqGoJmhr6A019xuRbQsZP5tmJVHqGSg-A4HoCnipfPwwxbB6dTadkPzCT5fpEkRXNkqROvLV34906wyM0Yz9GCVECpn8myqTS3suoeqg@docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Reply</a><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkI&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Open</a><br></td></tr></tbody></table><div style="height:24px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Replace:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"her"</i></span> with <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"the EPDP in their official"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Marika Konings</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span></span> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><table style="padding-left:calc(48px + 15px)"><tbody><tr><td><a target="_blank" href="mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcocxvV6fJMlU34sYNiXR3tjhbkV547x6mgPvUQxBFhV8gwOQJFMlMTgpR0mz2CmPvvc064Yo6GsIrjrQN1BRimwbS64VGe-Z4Ao_jO-QSQ3Wv88VM@docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Reply</a><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkE&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Open</a><br></td></tr></tbody></table><div style="height:24px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Replace:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"Will make clear when he/she is acting"</i></span> with <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"Only participate"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Marika Konings</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span></span> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><table style="padding-left:calc(48px + 15px)"><tbody><tr><td><a target="_blank" href="mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcz8Ho21DqHezbWyCk22b7jPW_xdmcw3oXWUrttIIV_supO65J3lmc8qCGsdIhOBbrTosqpTaAATPciNG_qeLdQFw45pOqDduslo9UW0qMkLQ7jgPQ@docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Reply</a><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0SkA&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Open</a><br></td></tr></tbody></table><div style="height:24px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Replace:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"in"</i></span> with <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"on calls in their official"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Marika Konings</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span></span> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><table style="padding-left:calc(48px + 15px)"><tbody><tr><td><a target="_blank" href="mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdDiYY7WbBShhMG6P6-xMh8dbtEpOnaja2fW94P2po3XzWFwy3cuBoGRLGmjC70CxTVwD8FPRmz7ztXijhc1gJftgMpFvflLUotugR9HBLjvfnnfsY@docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Reply</a><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sj4&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Open</a><br></td></tr></tbody></table><div style="height:24px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Delete:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"ing"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Marika Konings</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span></span> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><table style="padding-left:calc(48px + 15px)"><tbody><tr><td><a target="_blank" href="mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRfTznDurVJ-EdwUPgYXbhKOTfRMwc3xWh-RxfjbNCl8xkdgW92dgO_WKPrFRS_dmAD8tKP_hPiv2OIsMRniQOiuQ5raWHZwz-jQ3AwWE1mvwUF2BVw@docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Reply</a><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sj0&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Open</a><br></td></tr></tbody></table><div style="height:24px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Replace:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"make it explicitly clear when he/she is"</i></span> with <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"channel such comments through the representatives of his or her Stakeholder Group, and to only"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Marika Konings</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span></span> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><table style="padding-left:calc(48px + 15px)"><tbody><tr><td><a target="_blank" href="mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRd219ABodPg_BH4cT5ZM2sny8sshk3d4KPI8np1ZjTeLhXLrz5quwjVscl7tQsnS1KcWHUGPY1_eCR1fsNTg_oNxYJ58bcNYhsY1JJZnkeRzAbfu78@docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Reply</a><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjw&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Open</a><br></td></tr></tbody></table><div style="height:24px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Replace:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>","</i></span> with <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>";"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Marika Konings</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span></span> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><table style="padding-left:calc(48px + 15px)"><tbody><tr><td><a target="_blank" href="mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRcFN2ClhUO6T4rIqp8NORym59WLlF6OLCrcDDC4scoykyFK9c1lhuU6begRodUzBU_k-T7zuA76E9f_yuJcMbIUf4YBHOsC7bJWl8EYTEcigpzuvGA@docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Reply</a><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjs&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Open</a><br></td></tr></tbody></table><div style="height:24px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Replace:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"/"</i></span> with <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"or"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Marika Konings</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span></span> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><table style="padding-left:calc(48px + 15px)"><tbody><tr><td><a target="_blank" href="mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRd2opzZZhJbu-Vmq58AFc5kSzZglNGMdlpd-EfUNYnTGJG1tCBLgngQ4ig43ifIQEqvy13olOc7vHAlVCzEAKpxus7VMi9SF61V17LQOnDMX4YJ5Z8@docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Reply</a><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjo&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Open</a><br></td></tr></tbody></table><div style="height:24px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Replace:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"/"</i></span> with <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"or"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Marika Konings</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span></span> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(34, 34, 34)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><table style="padding-left:calc(48px + 15px)"><tbody><tr><td><a target="_blank" href="mailTo:Reply%20%3Cd+AORGpRdbfZv_oRb_o0GRnR2pdKREeAgGA_RueKlBjx9GlaSIuZ8fumyGRpsUam42uyrzDNWkvwF7VwcqJt1ve7ScFca_9JdGFYI6Dus80AkjP_2yD14OfUA@docs.google.com%3E?subject=EDPD%20Leadership%20Comments%20Table" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Reply</a><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dp8PEa4Y2_ezAMc-HKR0nMchcFvDGkPbs5XLBsittHk/edit?disco=AAAACA-0Sjk&usp=suggestion_email_discussion&ts=5b3e955f" style="background-color:whitesmoke;border:1px solid gainsboro;border-radius:2px;color:#444;display:inline-block;font-size:11px;font-weight:bold;height:27px;line-height:27px;margin-right:16px;min-width:54px;outline:0px;padding:0 8px;text-align:center;text-decoration:none">Open</a><br></td></tr></tbody></table><div style="height:24px"><br></div><div style="height:1px;background-color:#eee"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div style="line-height:21px;padding-top:16px"><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Ayden Férdeline" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td><td style="vertical-align:top"><div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><div><b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <br></div><p style="margin:0"><span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><span class="size" style="font-size:13px"></span></span><br></p><div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><b>Delete:</b> <span class="colour" style="color:rgb(119, 119, 119)"><i>"wish"</i></span><br></div><p><br></p></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div style="overflow:hidden;margin-top:10px;margin-bottom:24px;word-break:break-word;word-wrap:break-word"><table style="width:100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td style="vertical-align:top;width:10%"><div style="max-height:77px;padding:0 15px 0 0"><img alt="Marika Konings" style="height:48px;width:48px" src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" class="proton-embedded"><br></div></td></tr></tbody></table></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote></blockquote></div></div></div></div></blockquote></div></blockquote></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>