[NCSG-PC] Public comments review - Urgent

Thu Apr 19 15:30:02 EEST 2018

Noted Rafik.

On Thu, Apr 19, 2018 at 4:31 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi Renata,
>
> Thanks for the response and for drafting. nobody can dismiss the challenge
> to draft and effort needed for that. as you submitted a draft, it gave us
> an opportunity to act and cover that public comment.
> I think we can shorten our comment as we are basically supporting the plan
> and we don't see a specific issue. with regard to SSAC itself and its
> working that may be reflected in the plan, I guess those are related to
> SSAC review when a call for input will be open to the community.
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
> 2018-04-19 0:16 GMT+09:00 Renata Aquino Ribeiro <raquino at gmail.com>:
>
>> [observer here]
>>
>> Hi
>>
>> Fully aware of being an observer of this group, I will reiterate what I
>> said on NCSG list
>> The NCAP was a real challenge and I don't think I did well on it, would
>> not submit as it was
>> I will continue to try and collaborate with other comments and possible
>> find more feasible ones to collaborate
>>
>> Since I submitted it though, it had contributions which I'm grateful for
>> so it is up to the PC NCSG where to take it
>>
>> I'm also aware that nothing what I had proposed is in the shortened
>> version but then again wouldn't expect that as the power is with the PC to
>> decide what to carry on to the final comment or not.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Renata
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Apr 18, 2018 at 2:40 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>>
>>> Thanks all, I think the comment for uniform screening process is ready
>>> and if there is no strong objection within the next 12 hours I will submit
>>> it. I attached the latest version.
>>> continuing to work on NCAP comment
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>>
>>> 2018-04-17 19:58 GMT+09:00 Stephanie Perrin <
>>> stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca>:
>>>
>>>> I commented on two.  I cannot seem to get back into the integrity
>>>> screening one....I think our preamble, if it mentions the prescursor to the
>>>> NCUC, should name it.  Here is the name
>>>>
>>>> NCDNHC       Non-Commercial Domain Name Holders Constituency
>>>>
>>>> I added it to the reserve fund comment but not the other
>>>>
>>>> cheers steph
>>>>
>>>> On 2018-04-17 04:24, Rafik Dammak wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Thanks all, I will try to resolve the comments and taking into account
>>>> the suggestion to shorten the NCAP comment
>>>>  those who didn't review yet, please do asap.
>>>>
>>>> Rafik
>>>> 2018-04-17 1:49 GMT+09:00 Farell FOLLY <farell at benin2point0.org>:
>>>>
>>>>> I have reviewed the NCAP comment and I am more or less aligned with
>>>>> the idea that it can be brief since there is nothing substantial we are
>>>>> pointing out.
>>>>>
>>>>> It seems that the penholder intends to raise an issue about
>>>>> Intellectual Property, but I am not getting the right point. I suggested to
>>>>> point out a use case to explain and we can see whether the issue is already
>>>>> covered in the proposed project plan or not. I can see that most of the
>>>>> points we’re raising in our draft are already taken into account. At the
>>>>> end, I made some inputs to format the document, if we were to be longer or
>>>>> consider adopting it in state.
>>>>>
>>>>> @__f_f__
>>>>>
>>>>> Best Regards
>>>>> ____________________________________
>>>>>
>>>>> Ekue (Farell) FOLLY
>>>>> Technology Champion & Chapter Head
>>>>> Africa 2.0 Foundation.
>>>>> farell at benin2point0.org
>>>>> www.africa2point0.org
>>>>> linkedin.com/in/farellf
>>>>> twitter.com/@__f_f__
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On 16 Apr 2018, at 09:19, Farell FOLLY <farell at benin2point0.org>
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> Dear Rafik,
>>>>>
>>>>> I will try and review some by today or no later than tomorrow.
>>>>>
>>>>> @__f_f__
>>>>>
>>>>> Best Regards
>>>>> ____________________________________
>>>>>
>>>>> Ekue (Farell) FOLLY
>>>>> Technology Champion & Chapter Head
>>>>> Africa 2.0 Foundation.
>>>>> farell at benin2point0.org
>>>>> www.africa2point0.org
>>>>> linkedin.com/in/farellf
>>>>> twitter.com/@__f_f__
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On 14 Apr 2018, at 03:44, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at GMAIL.COM> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> Hi all,
>>>>>
>>>>> we have several draft comments in pipeline and they need PC review.
>>>>> some may need some rework.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>    - *Draft Project Plan for the Proposed Name Collision Analysis
>>>>>    Project*
>>>>>    <https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ncap-project-plan-2018-03-02-en>
>>>>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jwK6ik8VgMjM26Q
>>>>>    UFcSmA0y9hBASmxMAGupnvvDSe2A/edit?usp=sharing
>>>>>    <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jwK6ik8VgMjM26QUFcSmA0y9hBASmxMAGupnvvDSe2A/edit?usp=sharing> ,
>>>>>    the dealdine is the 18th April
>>>>>    - Uniform Board Member Integrity Screening Process
>>>>>    <https://www.icann.org/public-comments/board-integrity-screening-2018-03-02-en>
>>>>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YS4ZCtcD_dOlP6va
>>>>>    1aInp0XuS4l7tunhQBgdFzMhuqo/edit
>>>>>    <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YS4ZCtcD_dOlP6va1aInp0XuS4l7tunhQBgdFzMhuqo/edit>
>>>>>    , the deadline is the 17th April
>>>>>    - ICANN Reserve Fund: Proposed Replenishment Strategy
>>>>>    <https://www.icann.org/public-comments/reserve-fund-replenishment-2018-03-06-en>
>>>>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cfjgDFI7KTPmxS9
>>>>>    _KLkIDHvtmoyRvNR6vlLsK-_l-2U/edit
>>>>>    <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cfjgDFI7KTPmxS9_KLkIDHvtmoyRvNR6vlLsK-_l-2U/edit>
>>>>>    deadline is the 25th April
>>>>>
>>>>> I expect that all PC members to review and help finalizing the
>>>>> comments with due diligeance. thanks to those who did already.
>>>>>
>>>>> Best,
>>>>>
>>>>> Rafik
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