[NCSG-PC] Public comments review - Urgent

Thu Apr 19 04:31:10 EEST 2018

Hi Renata,

Thanks for the response and for drafting. nobody can dismiss the challenge
to draft and effort needed for that. as you submitted a draft, it gave us
an opportunity to act and cover that public comment.
I think we can shorten our comment as we are basically supporting the plan
and we don't see a specific issue. with regard to SSAC itself and its
working that may be reflected in the plan, I guess those are related to
SSAC review when a call for input will be open to the community.

Best,

Rafik

2018-04-19 0:16 GMT+09:00 Renata Aquino Ribeiro <raquino at gmail.com>:

> [observer here]
>
> Hi
>
> Fully aware of being an observer of this group, I will reiterate what I
> said on NCSG list
> The NCAP was a real challenge and I don't think I did well on it, would
> not submit as it was
> I will continue to try and collaborate with other comments and possible
> find more feasible ones to collaborate
>
> Since I submitted it though, it had contributions which I'm grateful for
> so it is up to the PC NCSG where to take it
>
> I'm also aware that nothing what I had proposed is in the shortened
> version but then again wouldn't expect that as the power is with the PC to
> decide what to carry on to the final comment or not.
>
> Best,
>
> Renata
>
>
>
>
> On Wed, Apr 18, 2018 at 2:40 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>>
>> Thanks all, I think the comment for uniform screening process is ready
>> and if there is no strong objection within the next 12 hours I will submit
>> it. I attached the latest version.
>> continuing to work on NCAP comment
>>
>> Rafik
>>
>>
>> 2018-04-17 19:58 GMT+09:00 Stephanie Perrin <
>> stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca>:
>>
>>> I commented on two.  I cannot seem to get back into the integrity
>>> screening one....I think our preamble, if it mentions the prescursor to the
>>> NCUC, should name it.  Here is the name
>>>
>>> NCDNHC       Non-Commercial Domain Name Holders Constituency
>>>
>>> I added it to the reserve fund comment but not the other
>>>
>>> cheers steph
>>>
>>> On 2018-04-17 04:24, Rafik Dammak wrote:
>>>
>>> Thanks all, I will try to resolve the comments and taking into account
>>> the suggestion to shorten the NCAP comment
>>>  those who didn't review yet, please do asap.
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>> 2018-04-17 1:49 GMT+09:00 Farell FOLLY <farell at benin2point0.org>:
>>>
>>>> I have reviewed the NCAP comment and I am more or less aligned with the
>>>> idea that it can be brief since there is nothing substantial we are
>>>> pointing out.
>>>>
>>>> It seems that the penholder intends to raise an issue about
>>>> Intellectual Property, but I am not getting the right point. I suggested to
>>>> point out a use case to explain and we can see whether the issue is already
>>>> covered in the proposed project plan or not. I can see that most of the
>>>> points we’re raising in our draft are already taken into account. At the
>>>> end, I made some inputs to format the document, if we were to be longer or
>>>> consider adopting it in state.
>>>>
>>>> @__f_f__
>>>>
>>>> Best Regards
>>>> ____________________________________
>>>>
>>>> Ekue (Farell) FOLLY
>>>> Technology Champion & Chapter Head
>>>> Africa 2.0 Foundation.
>>>> farell at benin2point0.org
>>>> www.africa2point0.org
>>>> linkedin.com/in/farellf
>>>> twitter.com/@__f_f__
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 16 Apr 2018, at 09:19, Farell FOLLY <farell at benin2point0.org> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Dear Rafik,
>>>>
>>>> I will try and review some by today or no later than tomorrow.
>>>>
>>>> @__f_f__
>>>>
>>>> Best Regards
>>>> ____________________________________
>>>>
>>>> Ekue (Farell) FOLLY
>>>> Technology Champion & Chapter Head
>>>> Africa 2.0 Foundation.
>>>> farell at benin2point0.org
>>>> www.africa2point0.org
>>>> linkedin.com/in/farellf
>>>> twitter.com/@__f_f__
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 14 Apr 2018, at 03:44, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at GMAIL.COM> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Hi all,
>>>>
>>>> we have several draft comments in pipeline and they need PC review.
>>>> some may need some rework.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>    - *Draft Project Plan for the Proposed Name Collision Analysis
>>>>    Project*
>>>>    <https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ncap-project-plan-2018-03-02-en>
>>>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jwK6ik8VgMjM26Q
>>>>    UFcSmA0y9hBASmxMAGupnvvDSe2A/edit?usp=sharing
>>>>    <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jwK6ik8VgMjM26QUFcSmA0y9hBASmxMAGupnvvDSe2A/edit?usp=sharing> ,
>>>>    the dealdine is the 18th April
>>>>    - Uniform Board Member Integrity Screening Process
>>>>    <https://www.icann.org/public-comments/board-integrity-screening-2018-03-02-en>
>>>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YS4ZCtcD_dOlP6va
>>>>    1aInp0XuS4l7tunhQBgdFzMhuqo/edit
>>>>    <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YS4ZCtcD_dOlP6va1aInp0XuS4l7tunhQBgdFzMhuqo/edit>
>>>>    , the deadline is the 17th April
>>>>    - ICANN Reserve Fund: Proposed Replenishment Strategy
>>>>    <https://www.icann.org/public-comments/reserve-fund-replenishment-2018-03-06-en>
>>>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cfjgDFI7KTPmxS9
>>>>    _KLkIDHvtmoyRvNR6vlLsK-_l-2U/edit
>>>>    <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cfjgDFI7KTPmxS9_KLkIDHvtmoyRvNR6vlLsK-_l-2U/edit>
>>>>    deadline is the 25th April
>>>>
>>>> I expect that all PC members to review and help finalizing the comments
>>>> with due diligeance. thanks to those who did already.
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Rafik
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