[NCSG-PC] Response to IPC/BC model

[Kathy Kleiman]

Hi All,

Tx to Ayden for his excellent edits, now incorporated (with a few 
comments highlighting proposed rephrasing, Ayden). Tx also to Martin for 
his review!

Back to the PC to continue review...

Best, Kathy


On 4/3/2018 7:40 PM, Martin Pablo Silva Valent wrote:
> I am reading it now, but between Kathy and Ayden’s work, it looks good 
> to go. I’ll add my comments if any. So far, my full support.
>
> Cheers,
> Martín
>
>> On 3 Apr 2018, at 20:38, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com 
>> <mailto:icann at ferdeline.com>> wrote:
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I have reviewed the document now and put forward some suggested 
>> edits. Some are substantive changes but all are in the same spirit of 
>> the original text.
>>
>> The formatting looks a bit odd; I hope the text alignments can be 
>> corrected prior to submission.
>>
>> I think the conclusion lacks punch; but can’t think of what it is 
>> missing at the moment...
>>
>> Best wishes,
>>
>> Ayden
>>
>> P.S. Thanks to those who drafted it
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Apr 4, 2018 at 01:24, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com 
>> <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>> Hi Farzaneh,
>>>
>>> thanks for this.
>>> I would like to ask PC members to review it asap.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>> 2018-04-04 6:57 GMT+09:00 farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com 
>>> <mailto:farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>>:
>>>
>>>     Hi all
>>>
>>>     Im on a plane so let me know if the link below is correct. Kathy
>>>     has written a response on ipc bc
>>>
>>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/16miuxuAYYgwUQHPde8N02W6G84oibuV9m4W3ZTeI_SA
>>>     <https://docs.google.com/document/d/16miuxuAYYgwUQHPde8N02W6G84oibuV9m4W3ZTeI_SA>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>     We need to go through it asap and send it before their meeting.
>>>
>>>     Please comment quickly and make sure you are on suggestion mode
>>>     (i set it that way not sure it went through)
>>>     -- 
>>>     Farzaneh
>>>
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