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<p>Hi All, <br>
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<p>Tx to Ayden for his excellent edits, now incorporated (with a few
comments highlighting proposed rephrasing, Ayden). Tx also to
Martin for his review!</p>
<p>Back to the PC to continue review...</p>
<p>Best, Kathy<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 4/3/2018 7:40 PM, Martin Pablo Silva
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I am reading it now, but between Kathy and Ayden’s work, it looks
good to go. I’ll add my comments if any. So far, my full support.
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<div class="">I have reviewed the document now and put
forward some suggested edits. Some are substantive
changes but all are in the same spirit of the original
text. </div>
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<div class="">The formatting looks a bit odd; I hope the
text alignments can be corrected prior to submission. </div>
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<div class="">I think the conclusion lacks punch; but
can’t think of what it is missing at the moment...</div>
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On Wed, Apr 4, 2018 at 01:24, Rafik Dammak <<a
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<div class="">thanks for this.</div>
<div class="">I would like to ask PC members
to review it asap. </div>
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<div class="">Best,</div>
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<div class="gmail_quote">2018-04-04 6:57 GMT+09:00
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<div dir="auto" class="">Hi all </div>
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<div dir="auto" class="">Im on a plane so let
me know if the link below is correct. Kathy
has written a response on ipc bc </div>
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<div dir="auto" class="">We need to go
through it asap and send it before their
meeting. </div>
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<div dir="auto" class="">Please comment
quickly and make sure you are on
suggestion mode (i set it that way not
sure it went through) </div>
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