[NCSG-PC] Proposal : Quick Guidelines for Public Comment Writing

dorothy g dgdorothydg at gmail.com
Wed Apr 4 02:31:51 EEST 2018


Thanks I suggest we build this into the guidelines. Your responses were
helpful, reminding us of the whole process.
best

On Tue, Apr 3, 2018 at 11:16 PM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi Farell,
>
> thanks for the proposal, I started my review there.
> I thought we can use BC template but I think we can have better. maybe
> something we can add is tracking and versioning in the document. but since
> we are using google doc and not word doc, it may be not necessary. We can
> also may add some letterhead with NCSG logo and Name but that is quite
> optional :)
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
> 2018-04-04 7:03 GMT+09:00 Farell FOLLY <farell at benin2point0.org>:
>
>> Dear All,
>>
>> Following The NCUC Policy and Public Comment Writing Course I
>> participated in in San Juan, I committed to suggest a few guidelines to
>> guide people who will volunteer to draft public comments in the future. It
>> can also helps us within the PC to quickly assess a document by using a
>> common framework. Most of the contents derived from the course which was
>> very appreciated by all the participants.
>>
>> Please see the document here
>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P1-Kuw_nS6uul7f3P-z6C3EopU8s3QP_BZhS0PRnm0o/edit?usp=sharing>
>>
>>
>>    1. The first page briefly outlines the key point to focus on while
>>    drafting a comment : Feel free to comment or make any suggestion that can
>>    help improve it.
>>    2. The second page is intended to help the new drafter start writing
>>    a comment by answering the questions directly : feel free to add more
>>    questions or modify the existing ones.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> @__f_f__
>>
>> Best Regards
>> ____________________________________
>>
>> Ekue (Farell) FOLLY
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>> Africa 2.0 Foundation.
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