[PC-NCSG] draft UDRP/RPM Comments

[Sam Lanfranco]

Thanks to Kathy and Stephanie for the work on the Draft Comments of NCSG 
to Preliminary Issue Report on a Policy  Development Process to Review 
All Rights Protection Mechanisms in All Generic Top-Level Domains.

I have appended the document as version 4, aa it was in version 3, with 
to added two comments/suggestions.

The first is to drop the explicit reference to the UDHR (p 4.1), but if 
kept correct it to properly read Universal Declaration of Human Rights, 
(not United Nations Declaration of Human Rights). Simply adding "freedom 
of expression" is adequate here.

The second is with regard to the "Redskins" trade mark decision (p. 2.8) 
where I would drop "powerful and very valuable" as irrelevant [unless 
one is a US football team owner or football fanatic (-: ]

Sam L.



On 29/11/2015 9:09 AM, Kathy Kleiman wrote:
> Stephanie's edits are great. They are still highlighted in the attached
> document. If you could review these comments today, we would appreciate
> it - and get them ready to submit tomorrow.
> Sorry for the delay, but PPSAI has been busy too!
> Best,
> Kathy
>
> On 11/28/2015 8:50 PM, Stephanie Perrin wrote:
>> As requested, I have given this excellent document a light edit in
>> markup.  This is certainly not my area of expertise, but it strikes me
>> as extremely important.  I invite those with greater knowledge than I
>> of UDRP matters to have a look at this document, make sure I did not
>> alter the meaning as I sought to correct typos etc, and see if more
>> should be added.  I think Kathy has definitely given them something to
>> chew on here, though, it looks excellent to me.  We must make sure we
>> get it in on time (deadline Monday). I am adding Monika to the cc as I
>> know that she has done work on the UDRP, as well as Wendy and Robin
>> since I am not sure they are on the NCSG-policy list.  The link for
>> the report is here:
>> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/rpm-prelim-issue-2015-10-09-en
>> kind regards
>> Stephanie Perrin
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