[PC-NCSG] Draft NCSG response to “Enhancing ICANN’s Accountability”-process. : PC endorsment
Rafik Dammak
rafik.dammak
Wed May 28 11:22:30 EEST 2014
that would be good question for Fadi who is looking to add new 2 tracks.
I really appreciate the work of Niels, Gabrielle for drafting Avri, Brenden
and others to comment and propose edit in such short time.
Rafik
2014-05-28 17:14 GMT+09:00 William Drake <wjdrake at gmail.com>:
> I?m utterly slammed today but added some quick comments. It?s crazy that
> such an important topic is given such a short time line?
>
> BTW NCUC and Robin will both have workshops on accountability and the AoC
> at IGF, this doc could serve as a background paper and basis for further
> interventions there and elsewhere.
>
> BD
>
>
> On May 28, 2014, at 5:16 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Maria,
>
> Gabrielle and Niels worked on the comments and made the edits in the
> document. so we have an updated version
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit
>
> I circulated the document again in NCSG mailing list. I would like to ask
> kindly NCSG PC members to review the document and getting consensus with
> due diligence to submit this comment.
>
> can you please set the start and end date for last call? as reminder the
> deadline for submission is *30th May 23:59UTC*. getting the green light
> after the confirmation of last call, I will submit the comment on behalf of
> NCSG.
>
> we have then later the reply period where I think we can work to add
> additional comments and responding to other groups submissions
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Rafik
>
>
> 2014-05-27 20:56 GMT+09:00 Maria Farrell <maria.farrell at gmail.com>:
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> Are Niels and Gabrielle happy with the current draft of the document at
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?
>>
>> As Rafik has pointed out, we have another couple of days to finalise. So
>> I'd just like to check if the interested people are still working on the
>> draft / or satisfied with it?
>>
>> All the best, Maria
>>
>>
>>
>> On 26 May 2014 06:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Marilia,
>>>
>>> thanks for the review and commenting. the deadline to submit was Tuesday
>>> 23:59 UTC but checking the announcement, we get 3 additional days because
>>> the technical issuers with migration to new website (
>>> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/enhancing-accountability-2014-05-06-en
>>> ).
>>>
>>> Policy Committee should endorse asap. I think that Maria will handle the
>>> last call as PC chair. then having the green light I will submit before the
>>> deadline.
>>>
>>> there will be reply period after this and I think we can expand with
>>> another comment about missing parts or clarifying others, in addition to
>>> commenting the contributions of other groups.
>>>
>>> Niels and Gabrielle are working on resolving remaining questions in the
>>> document.
>>>
>>> Best Regards,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>>
>>> 2014-05-26 8:03 GMT+09:00 Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com>:
>>>
>>> Thanks, Rafik. Made a few comments, mostly on top of others.
>>>> Good contribution. Thanks to folks of Article 19 and others who worked
>>>> on it.
>>>> Best,
>>>> Mar?lia
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Fri, May 23, 2014 at 2:42 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi Avri,
>>>>>
>>>>> Niels and Gabrielle will answers comments soon. and yes we should
>>>>> lockdown on language soon. hope that next comments would propose some
>>>>> wording.
>>>>> I think we will be more efficient than ITU.. hopefully :)
>>>>>
>>>>> Best Regards,
>>>>>
>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>
>>>>> 2014-05-23 1:55 GMT+09:00 Avri Doria <avri at acm.org>:
>>>>>
>>>>> hi,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> had already indicated it in comments. have now added words to Rafik's
>>>>>> added words.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> added some other weasel words too in response to some of Milton's
>>>>>> concerns.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> when do we get a lock down on the language and a removal of brackets.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> [we have become so ITU.]
>>>>>>
>>>>>> avri
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 22-May-14 10:47, Maria Farrell wrote:
>>>>>> > Hi guys,
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > No final call has yet been made. Avri, would you mind marking up the
>>>>>> > text with your suggestions and re-circulating?
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Many thanks, Maria
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > On 22 May 2014 13:22, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
>>>>>> > <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Hi Rudi,
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > no, Niels shared the document two days ago and we are getting
>>>>>> > comments now.
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Rafik
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > 2014-05-22 17:08 GMT+09:00 Rudi Vansnick <rudi.vansnick at isoc.be
>>>>>> > <mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be>>:
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > If I?m not wrong we agreed on the content of the proposed
>>>>>> > document (googledoc) a week ago.
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Maria, can you proceed ?
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Kind regards,
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Rudi Vansnick
>>>>>> > NPOC chair Policy Committee
>>>>>> > NPOC treasurer
>>>>>> > rudi.vansnick at npoc.org <mailto:rudi.vansnick at npoc.org>
>>>>>> > Tel : +32 (0)9 329 39 16<tel:%2B32%20%280%299%20329%2039%2016>
>>>>>> > Mobile : +32 (0)475 28 16 32<tel:%2B32%20%280%29475%2028%2016%2032>
>>>>>> > www.npoc.org <http://www.npoc.org>
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Op 20-mei-2014, om 13:06 heeft Rafik Dammak
>>>>>> > <rafik.dammak at gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>>
>>>>>> het
>>>>>> > volgende geschreven:
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> >> Hi everyone,
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> We have this draft commenting ICANN accountability. The
>>>>>> >> comment deadline is 27th may.
>>>>>> >> I count on PC to act quickly.
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Best Regards,
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Rafik
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>>>>>> >> From: "Niels ten Oever" <lists at digitaldissidents.org
>>>>>> >> <mailto:lists at digitaldissidents.org>>
>>>>>> >> Date: May 20, 2014 7:58 PM
>>>>>> >> Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
>>>>>> >> ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
>>>>>> >> To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu
>>>>>> >> <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>>
>>>>>> >> Cc:
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Dear all,
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Gabrielle and I, with the great comments from Brenden and
>>>>>> >> Avri, have
>>>>>> >> drafted a potential NCSG response to the ?Enhancing ICANN?s
>>>>>> >> Accountability?-process. You can find it and comment here:
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?usp=sharing
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> The deadline is Tuesday next week, so it would be great if
>>>>>> you
>>>>>> >> could
>>>>>> >> share your comments before Monday the 26th.
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Best,
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Niels
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Niels ten Oever
>>>>>> >> Acting Head of Digital
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Article 19
>>>>>> >> www.article19.org <http://www.article19.org/>
>>>>>> >>
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>>>>>> 636D
>>>>>> >> 68E9
>>>>>> >>
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